I Left My Horse In Tarmitta(Hardcore,GP5,GP4,midi)
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04-06-2008, 03:48 PM
First off every title I have is a joke. This is a more finished product of an intro I posted forever ago, one that I didn't know what to do with. I might get around to adding drums eventually. There is a piano bridge that I still need to write but other than that it is all done. Crit 4 crit. Thanks.
04-06-2008, 03:56 PM
The bridge and outro feel a little disconnected to me.
04-06-2008, 04:06 PM
I think with drums it would tie in well, as it would with vocals, just my opinion however.
04-06-2008, 06:57 PM
i really liked the intro/outro but the verses sounded VERY generic. the 5-4-7-8 palm mutes were too slow, and the whole thing moved too slow. consolation:speed verse 1 to verse 2 up 2x and its sounds pretty cool. the bridge should lead off into somthing other than the verse. expand on that little riff in the bridge or something.
the breakdown sounds TERRIBLE on midi. theres a limit on how many clashes you can have before it sounds like a 3 yr old trying to be funny by picking any two black and white keys right next to each other on a piano.
also work on transitions between sections
overall 5/10 half was great, other half wasnt :-/ sorry to be harsh but at least im honest.
thanks for the crit btw :D
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