Symphonic Black Metal [GP4, GP5] CRIT 4 CRIT


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deathmetallover
04-14-2008, 05:55 AM
This is my band's first song, although still a work in progress, I thought I would post it and see what you thought, crits are welcome and will be returned.
Cheers

PS. This song was made in guitar pro, using RSE. The volumes may be off when listening with MIDI, so just use RSE, sounds better anyway.

tiammetadeth
04-14-2008, 08:34 AM
really nice, spooky :p ...sure the vocals will give it more accent...
but i have a suggestion, in the bar no.76, in the piano track...try B instead of A#...i think it suits better

deathmetallover
04-14-2008, 08:57 AM
yeah man, cheers, that b does sound much nicer, the vocals are a mix of black, death and clean singing so it takes out any repetetiveness that the song may contain.

TeraBite
04-14-2008, 11:35 AM
crrit and listen

niiiice intro, good and spooky, i really like it

good boom as the band enters, good rolling drums

next bit, veeery heavy, insane drums o.0 are they possible?

riff2 and enter piano sounds very gothic, good so far

re-intro, personally i dont like the piano, but it completely fits

finale, excellent ending

9/10

crit "Hellbound Believer?"

deathmetallover
04-15-2008, 06:39 AM
cool man, u dont like the reintro piano? thats the bit i love most, what is it you don't like about it?

kiki94bass
04-15-2008, 02:02 PM
REINTRO(PIANO SOLO) HOLY S***(in a good way) , I LOVE IT!!!

BKGMorley
04-16-2008, 01:21 AM
That riif 2 was very Emperor sounding, in fact to be fair the whole song was along those lines. not the piano interlude though

deathmetallover
04-16-2008, 03:29 AM
haha, yeah, been told that before, emperor is definately a major influence, as well as dimmu borgir. :devil:

SHEEM
04-16-2008, 12:58 PM
Nice strings, but the drums are too fast. Add more bass drums, and less snares in the middle of the song.

deathmetallover
04-16-2008, 01:11 PM
with this type of music, the blast beats are essential in black metal, without them its just not the same.

SHEEM
04-16-2008, 01:15 PM
I'm no expert at black metal, but just half-speed the snare. maybe you could play with with electric/acoustic snaring.

Mcleody
05-06-2008, 04:26 PM
your band got a myspace page or anything :P lol

deathmetallover
05-07-2008, 03:39 AM
unfortunately no, we're just lazy, still haven't decided on a name yet :rolleyes:

Necrolust
05-07-2008, 03:43 AM
Not bad, the intro build up is too long with a few mistakes but when the guitars enter it sounds good.