Feedback/Advice on a WIP


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deet
07-16-2008, 04:44 PM
Well I was just killing time today and decided to fool around and thought of this. My one problem I have with this tab is bars 24-27. Doesn't sound too good. If anyone could give some advice it'd be much appreciated. :D It's in guitar pro so sorry if you can't view it.

gibder
07-16-2008, 04:50 PM
I think its really good that way

icronic
07-16-2008, 05:09 PM
The only real problem I see between 24-37 is the second guitar. Try changing the Tremolo'd G to a B for the first two bars. Other than that, it sounds good.

What really needs work is the time signature changes. They're just not working.

deet
07-16-2008, 05:23 PM
Yea I'm having trouble with the signatures lol. Thanks for the advice so far guys :D