Metalcore Song (GP5,GP4,MIDI)

[Lloyd1093]

This is my first fully complete song with drums and everything, tell me what you guys think.

[1crazyboy7]

The intro was nice.

The chorus sounding part starting at 29 was catchy and calm which I like for choruses in metalcore.

I like the organ after the chorus. Ten it went back to the same sounding part a little to quickly.

The solo at that part needed a lot of work. It was too quick, all on one sting mostly and some off key notes at 57.

Then it goes into a pre-chorus thing which sounds good.

The bass in this song is pretty amazing, by the way

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Bassickly, the song was pretty good. 8/10

If the solo was better and u touched up some other things this could of been 9/10 or a 10/10.

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=914388
mind critting mine?