Dreamer [MIDI]


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gary2damax
07-28-2008, 06:29 AM
Hiya :) This song was written through Guitar Pro 5.2 Demo (Because I'm cheap ^^) and saved as a MIDI. C4C if I am able to. Comments and crit welcome.

It is located here:

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?mijnejvg0ng

opc100
07-28-2008, 07:32 AM
it's quite relaxing at the start but then it never seems to go anywhere. i'd suggest making it longer and bring in some drums and a distorted guitar to give it a bit of oomph, but i'm trying to make this into a prog metal song :)
overall though, a nicely written song. 7/10
C4C Treading Water, first page.

~Sorry i's not a little longer, but when it's only a midi it's hard to crit properly, for me anyway.

SocialismCross
01-12-2009, 07:04 PM
well i don't think i'm going to say anything new, just make it go somewhere else, like add a minor chord that fits. and if you gonna make it longer, i'd recommened not having the same riff of that main acoustic guitar played over and over again.

besides that, i really like it.