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Nightmarenny
07-28-2008, 11:21 PM
My song

Its_Rock77
07-29-2008, 12:36 AM
is this unfinished? It seemed to kinda just stop....

but other than that, this was really nice easy listening. I think you could do so much more with it though. Put in some cool leads and maybe a string arrangement or something.

this song has potential. :)

Nightmarenny
07-29-2008, 02:55 AM
is this unfinished? It seemed to kinda just stop....

but other than that, this was really nice easy listening. I think you could do so much more with it though. Put in some cool leads and maybe a string arrangement or something.

this song has potential. :)
Yes, after finishing the second chorus it would hit a breakdown/solo of sorts then I'm not sure how to end it. I've been trying to add more lead but it keeps feeling sorta frazzled if I add something during the singing any suggestions how to go about it?

Its_Rock77
07-29-2008, 11:35 AM
if you stick to the notes of the major scale, it should turn out sounding pretty nicely. It always does for me.