New Hard Rock/Metal/Pop Rock Song
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07-29-2008, 04:00 PM
A Bit Chatchy - have A Listen And See Wha You Think :)
btw this solo is the first solo i've ever composed :P
07-29-2008, 05:24 PM
A bit catchy indeed. I liked the melody quite a lot.
The rhythm part could use a little spicing up though, especially in the verses, everything feels just a little too straight up on the beat.
The solo was pretty good, especially if it's the first one you've done.
I liked the break as well, although maybe you could have the guitars doing slightly different things?
Either way, is basic, but it's a still fairly solid. With some minor alterations and variations it could be great.
07-29-2008, 06:34 PM
i agree with all of what was said above.
the solo was sounded great mostly although a couple of notes sounded wrong
the rhythm i think needs spicing up a bit, make it more of a riff than power chord repeats
apart from that, great song
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