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StreetLight3989
08-02-2008, 03:04 PM
Milo Goes To College!!

Ok, there are some mistakes and stuff, but overall I think it's pretty good. So here it is, enjoy it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_7dWGYHuFEU

ratmblink123
08-02-2008, 03:09 PM
I want a... SUBURBAN HOME!
:cool:

I thought it was pretty good, like you said, I could tell there were a few mistakes, but overall it was pretty funny.

EDIT: I commented it.

BrianApocalypse
08-02-2008, 03:13 PM
Why it was good:
- The mom was hot. I'd love to Gene Simmons her.

Why it was not good:
- It needs some kind of very light background noise at the start, because it sounds unnaturally quiet whenever there isn't dialogue.
- It had sh*t music in the middle.

StreetLight3989
08-02-2008, 03:15 PM
Why it was good:
- The mom was hot. I'd love to Gene Simmons her.

Why it was not good:
- It needs some kind of very light background noise at the start, because it sounds unnaturally quiet whenever there isn't dialogue.
- It had sh*t music in the middle.
Yeah, I should have put noise in the beginning, and the music is a Decendents clip I took from online and made it shake and look like home video like the two main characters were taping it, because well, it was about a Decendents album. Also, I can't watch my own work no matter what, even if it's amazing for some reason it's hard to go back and watch it.

lolmnt
08-02-2008, 03:21 PM
Was he wearing a Pink Floyd shirt when he was supposed to be punk?

There was noise when nobody was talking.

I would have used a different song at then end.

Overall I'll give it a 7 out of 10.

StreetLight3989
08-02-2008, 03:25 PM
Was he wearing a Pink Floyd shirt when he was supposed to be punk?

There was noise when nobody was talking.

I would have used a different song at then end.

Overall I'll give it a 7 out of ten.
The Pink Floyd shirt was unavoidable, the kid brought 4 shirts with him not knowing the roll yet and he brought Bowie, Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, and Chiodos. Obviously, we put the Bowie shirt on the other kid but we had Zeppelin, Chiodos, and Pink Floyd to choose from so we just went with Pink Floyd. About the song thing, I was going to do a different Descendents song, but I'm a Final Cut n00b and I forgot how to actually upload the song onto it, lol. Anyway, I agree on the rating, it was decent, but not my best work.

original=punk
08-02-2008, 03:27 PM
I'd use a different song at the end. I can't hear what they're listening to on the stereo. That's my only gripes, other than that, s'cool.

StreetLight3989
08-02-2008, 03:33 PM
Yeah, I was debating whether to put music on the stereo scenes or not. I mean, I could've put low music on them, but I think it worked out fine this way.

sargasm
08-02-2008, 03:34 PM
I liked the guy's bowie shirt.

I also liked the mom. ;)

That was really good overall. It just seemed a bit weird when he was supposed to be listening to music but there wasn't any music.

waterproofpie
08-02-2008, 06:14 PM
I liked your mom and it's no fad?

StreetLight3989
08-02-2008, 06:48 PM
I want to marry her and be your dad...

BrianApocalypse
08-02-2008, 06:52 PM
It's a bastard not being able to enjoy your own work.

Luckily I am extremely self absorbed and don't have that problem.

crustyreed
08-02-2008, 07:02 PM
I liked it. i felt the 'concert' was a little long though.

StreetLight3989
08-02-2008, 07:18 PM
I liked it. i felt the 'concert' was a little long though.
Yeah, I was debating whether to cut it, but I decided to leave the whole youtube video in.

original=punk
08-02-2008, 07:47 PM
Yeah, the mom was quite bangable.

I_Pwn
08-02-2008, 07:49 PM
I enjoyed this. My main beefs were that there should have been music while he was listening to the music, and that there should have been a different ending song.

neidnarb11890
08-02-2008, 07:53 PM
I enjoyed this. My main beefs were that there should have been music while he was listening to the music, and that there should have been a different ending song.
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I liked it. i felt the 'concert' was a little long though.
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my opinion

kaptink
08-03-2008, 03:31 PM
You should have dressed the main guy up in square glasses and a tie!

BrianApocalypse
08-03-2008, 03:41 PM
Yeah, the mom was quite bangable.

Yeah, even more so if she hadn't been a christian fundamentalist.

lavazza
08-04-2008, 04:12 AM
Yeah, even more so if she hadn't been a christian fundamentalist.

Maybe sheŽd dress as a nun for you.....

BrianApocalypse
08-04-2008, 08:20 AM
That would be pretty kinky.

We could re-enact Church of Scat!