Unfinished screamo/post-hardcore songs (GP5/GP4)


PDA

View Full Version : Unfinished screamo/post-hardcore songs (GP5/GP4)


Friendly Stoat
08-28-2008, 11:58 AM
So here are 2 new songs that I started recently, possibly for a solo project or possibly for a new band. As the title says I haven't got round to finishing them yet but I just wanted some opinions on what I've done so far please :)

I'll do C4C if anyone wants.

Thanks!

kylendm
08-28-2008, 08:01 PM
Hey thanks for the crit mate =). I liked both of these to let me start off...

Screamo 1 sounded good in the beginning but it felt a little repetitive which isn't a problem since vocals could go over it. The next set of riffs were nice and the Chorus part was good too. Keep going with that one.

Screamo 2 I liked it better. It had a nicer flow i felt. The Rhythm guitar is flying in the beginning, i liked it though. Then the clean part was a nice touch. It went back tot the beginning that's cool. I like the riffs that had the constant rests in them it, it was cool almost Paramoreish (new word.) But i liked it.

Overall: keep going with both of them. I like screamo and both songs should turn out nice.

Friendly Stoat
08-30-2008, 07:51 AM
Thanks mate :) I'll probably post both songs again when they're finished :)