my rock contest entry [dif bridge]


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ninja.kitty
08-30-2008, 07:31 PM
i just redid the bridge, and idk. i guess i just wanted you to hear it. it doesnt sound as crazy :confus:

Hale_91
08-30-2008, 07:41 PM
there shouldnt be 5 chords in your progression

that just makes it sound weird

ninja.kitty
08-30-2008, 09:02 PM
there shouldnt be 5 chords in your progression

that just makes it sound weirdim sorry i didnt do the standard 4 chord progression, i tried doing something different?

Hale_91
08-30-2008, 10:31 PM
yeah, experimenting is great, thats all good.

i just think it sounds weird.

maybe the 5th bar shouldnt be another chord, but a run or some random thing.

169290
08-31-2008, 03:07 PM
change or lose the bridge it kills the song! and the start is very all american rejects i like the start the 5 chord progression is a little wierd but it could work! keep up the good work

crit mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=947974

Its_Rock77
09-02-2008, 11:36 PM
I still love your bridge. It's quite intense. this song is awesome. nice easy listening and some nice (noteasy?) listening there in the middle. I don't really have anything bad to say about it. chorus was really awesome as well as the verses. you made a somewhat simple chord progression sound pretty sweet. :)

I love your songs. :cheers: