Hows my tab?

[Mrhankymk]

Hi.. I've started sort of writing songs.. Well I don't think they're too great and I need to know what direction I should be heading so I need some advice. To start off I wrote something with some help from Stone Sour - Through Glass


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---------------------------------------8-----------------8-----------------5-------------------------------------
---0---4-----------0---7-------------9----9---9------9----9---9--777----------------------------------------
-----5----5---5------7----7---7----9--------9------9--------9----557----------------------------------------
-3----------3----5----------5----7---------------7---------------555----------------------------------------
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What can I do to make this better?

PS Sorry the tab looks messed up.. doesn't transfer very good from notepad.

[Its_Rock77]

PS Sorry the tab looks messed up.. doesn't transfer very good from notepad.
so edit your post to fix the spacing errors? :bonk:
everything character is equally spaced when you use "code" so you can just add or subtract dashes to get everything aligned. :cheers:

but it sounds decently cool the way I play it. I need some rhythm to build from though...

[Mrhankymk]

Alright all fixed.. kinda.. sorta messed up a lil but it works i guess.

[Its_Rock77]

sorry, the :bonk: I added in there made me sound like a jerk. :(