My first song [GP5]


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Stian16
09-02-2008, 04:22 PM
Made my first song yesterday and just wanted to share it with you. Don't take it too seriously, I've just been playing for 3/4 year or something. Didn't add drums btw.

Name: Never gonna tell you how :P

gallagher2006
09-02-2008, 04:35 PM
I totally thought this was going to be a pseudo rick roll...but a few nice riffs in thar

Stian16
09-02-2008, 04:52 PM
thanks :D

Skillet_Panhead
09-02-2008, 07:17 PM
Hey man, for your first song, that was pretty great! Personally I think you use that D5 chord a little much in the intro, but it flows good so leave it. Like gallagher said, you did have some catchy riffs. The biggest standout riff, for me, I think were the arpeggio's starting at measure 40. Those were really cool. And to backtrack a little, the verse riff was also a highlight. But the solo, wow. You've been playing about as long as I have, and that solo kicks the crap out of any solo I've written so far. Great job! Maybe I'll have to take a soloing lesson from you or something ;)

Anyway, I know you didn't put c4c, but would you mind checking my song out anyway?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=943853
That'd be really awesome. Thanks!

ShredderA7X
09-03-2008, 05:56 AM
Quite a funky bassline. I took all the other instruments out and turned the bass to slap bass and its sexual.

9/10 (D5 Chord used too often in Intro, But I loved it still)

Stian16
09-03-2008, 10:23 AM
wow, thanks for the good response! btw, the D5s just came out, couldn't control it :P

Glad you liked the bass riff ShredderA7X ;) (Avenged sevenfold rocks!)