I'll Steal Bank (Hardcore?) [gtp5,gtp4,mid] С4С


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fill
09-05-2008, 02:31 AM
So, My New Hardcore'ish song Plz C4C!!!

I want to steal bank)))

Ps By The way What you think about drumline? (because i am like play drum)

bakshandloomis
09-05-2008, 08:48 PM
Thanks for the crit!
What is up with the first bar? :haha. I liked verse 1 a lot. I wasn't too fond of the chorus until the tremolo picking came in. The part at 63 would sound a lot better if you kept it all as quarter notes, IMO, instead have the two 8th notes in front of the 4-5-7. The rest of the breakdown/bridge was cool. The clean part was frekin sweet, I think you should expand on that, make it a lot longer. You had a nice transition coming back into the distortion. I loved the last riff of the song.
Overall, I'd give it a 7.5/10, nice job.