Tech Punk? GP5


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JohnnyNapalm
09-07-2008, 03:27 PM
I wouldn't really know what to call this but go ahead and listen i think its pretty cool.

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=5b920b21d9f6a4e1d2db6fb9a8902bda

ch715dallat
09-07-2008, 03:35 PM
lern2attach

JohnnyNapalm
09-07-2008, 03:36 PM
I think you're retarded cause it works just fine this way.

ch715dallat
09-07-2008, 03:39 PM
yes but i will guarantee you get a serious fewer number of replies.

anyhoo it was pretty good at the more tech parts, although its more metalcore than punk tbh.

JohnnyNapalm
09-07-2008, 03:43 PM
yeah this isn't my genre really. check this out if you like btbam

ch715dallat
09-07-2008, 04:07 PM
bars 20 - 56 were fantastic the rest was a bit meh tbh, sure its technical and yeah i like that but it was nearly to eratic to be catchy. maybe as transitions but as standalone riffs, not my cup of tea. but as i say, 20-56 were awesome.

bakshandloomis
09-07-2008, 05:10 PM
Can you put in GP4 form? If it's anything like BTBAM I want to check it out.

bloodshed344
09-07-2008, 06:06 PM
I kind of agree with ch715dallat, cept I think it's all kinda good and the section he pointed out was just a bit better than the rest.

I also think some of those riffs would make great transitions and you got some pretty cool rhythmic ideas at some parts.

Its_Rock77
09-07-2008, 07:40 PM
it seemed way too all over the place for the style you seem to be leaning toward.
you've got some cool riffs in there (opener was very well done IMO) but they just don't flow that well. Time Sigs just seem really gimmicky in this song. most of it sounded like it would feel 10 times better just in normal 4/4. but that might just be me.
keep working this though, it could be cool. :)

crit mine? it's in my sig. :cheers: