Hardcore ( ? )

[Pierrot66]

Hello to all !
Nice, I am then french I pray you to make excuses if my english is nasty.

I would have loved knowledge what you were thinking of this composing beginning
and if you can give advice me ! :(

So long !

[ch715dallat]

the riff starting at 18 was pretty awesome. the intro chugs were not a very good pattern IMO, didnt like it. although the bit at 42 was awesome. just work on the drums and flesh out the rest of the song and finish it and it could be a great song.

[Pierrot66]

Ok Thanks !

yes it is a try because I compromise on "tuxguitar", and it is not very practical :S