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Friendly Stoat
09-13-2008, 04:42 PM
Hey. This is a song I wrote recently which I think has elements of metalcore and deathcore in it, I'm planning on doing this in a possible future band. Any opinions? I will do C4C if anyone wants.

Cheers! :)

tdrules
09-13-2008, 04:49 PM
i really like the whole melody going on
went to a free gig today at zavvi in manchester, there was loads of hardcore bands, but there was hardly any that had any kind of melody, which is the best thing to have

Friendly Stoat
09-13-2008, 04:51 PM
:) Cheers mate. Hope you enjoyed the gig anyway :p:

bender424
09-13-2008, 04:54 PM
it sound awesome !!
esapacialy the intro and the part where the drum slow the beat
keep going =D

Friendly Stoat
09-13-2008, 05:01 PM
:) thanks man.

bakshandloomis
09-21-2008, 01:19 PM
Thanks for the crit.

Nice intro, gets the song moving at a fast pace from the start. I like the next riff, except for the dissonance bars; I just didn't feel like this was the right place for dissonance, maybe that's just me. The next riff reminded me of Trivium, which is a good thing. The short solo was pretty cool. The riff following the solo was also pretty good. The riff starting at 61 I wasn't too fond of; if I were you I would take that part out and keep the song at the same tempo. But I like how it ended with the chorus, that's defiantly something you want to keep.

Friendly Stoat
09-21-2008, 02:22 PM
Thanks for the crit mate, I like the tempo change bit but I think it doesn't seem to change very well... do you think it would be better if I could improve on the transition? OR just change it altogether?

Cheers :cheers:

reaper_x
09-22-2008, 07:27 AM
What can i say?
I despise deathcore and anything associated with that.

but this was gold.
i LOVE bar 32. It sounded more "Hardcore" than anything else to be honest.

Nontheless, Amazing job.

tincsi666
09-22-2008, 04:31 PM
liked it very much except 21 - 31. the solo is also nice.
8/10

return critics plz
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=963236

imposiitin
09-23-2008, 02:45 PM
First I have to say I'm not much of a fan of deathcore.
But to the song->
The intro is nice very good melody and well composed. The riff after that is also good except the dissonance thingy on bars 12 and 16. I like also the next riff, but the smashing drums at start sound a bit harsh to my ear(might be just me). The solo's cool, keeps up the feeling. The riff that starts at 61bar, I don't like. Might be because I don't like deathcore, and to me it sounds like deahcore, or atleast some death-(?). Good idea to use the intro also as an ending, don't take it out. :)

Friendly Stoat
09-23-2008, 02:57 PM
Thanks for the crits guys, I'll bear in mind what you've all said. Keep 'em coming :)

recklessnick
09-24-2008, 12:24 AM
sry man, i dont like it. just feels kinda the weird, the harmonies and everything, doesnt really fall into scale. and dissonance isnt really my thing.

bloodshed344
09-24-2008, 12:56 AM
Dissonance is great when used right and this song really does that. Ignore the people that say it isn't good or dissonance is bad or whatever, it's all great. The only thing really wrong with this song is repetitiveness.

recklessnick
09-24-2008, 01:18 AM
.... ignore? i just said it wasnt MY THING. i didnt say it was bad dude...

bloodshed344
09-24-2008, 02:00 AM
I wasn't talking to you specifically, and the way you put it made it seem as if you were calling it bad, but I guess I'm wrong on that part.

Friendly Stoat
09-24-2008, 11:40 AM
Thanks for the crits guys. I like all crit, good or bad :p:

omgitsblake
09-25-2008, 07:20 PM
the intro riff sounds almost exactly like the theme from endzeit by heaven shall burn off the iconoclast album

=O

huevos
09-29-2008, 11:09 PM
Very good.
Most of the 'core bands have become far too stale and repetative.

This song sounds like it was influenced by All That Remains, Unearth, and Heaven Shall Burn. I don't mean that in a bad way either, as those are some of the only core bands that I really like.

Friendly Stoat
09-30-2008, 11:41 AM
the intro riff sounds almost exactly like the theme from endzeit by heaven shall burn off the iconoclast album

=O

I've never heard that song :p:

Very good.
Most of the 'core bands have become far too stale and repetative.

This song sounds like it was influenced by All That Remains, Unearth, and Heaven Shall Burn. I don't mean that in a bad way either, as those are some of the only core bands that I really like.

Yeah, it was definetly influenced a little by ATR. Cheers :)

MetalheadA7X
09-30-2008, 03:22 PM
All good mate

Just the tempo change is too abrupt.

other than that great effort :D

8/10

TooLz
10-01-2008, 02:46 PM
Good tune, i especially like when the beat changes at bar 25. Bar 36 was cool too. For Guitar one Bar 12, and 17-32 were very awesomely dissonant. In bar 45 and 49 what guitar 1 does is good, but it hard to make out. Maybe make both guitars do the riff, it would sound better. But everyone likes something different, you got a good song here.
8.5/10

C4C
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=967826