"My (inter)Net" [Metalcore, C4C]
 

Hi everyone, this is a song I wrote today and I'm looking for some critique mostly on the writing aspects rather than recording. I haven't written many songs before as I am the vocalist in my metal core band, I just wanted to give it a shot. GP file attached and track on sound cloud with vocals. Cheers :)

soundcloud with vox - soundcloud.com/roth-2/my-inter-net