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treborillusion 10-10-2012 02:00 AM

Fun Is For Everyone
 
Numb numb nom on this
Milk for your chocolate chips
Jumping on my pogo stick
Bags of candy make me sick

In this jungle gym I live
Girls and boys play like this
Fun is for everyone
Fun fun fun fun

whoomit 10-10-2012 05:13 AM

It's good because it's true.

Mr.Pink101 10-10-2012 07:33 AM

This made me smile.

I particulaly like the deep metaphorical commentary on the political tension between India and Pakistan in that first stanza, higher order intelligence sir.

#1 synth 10-10-2012 09:34 AM


Nilchii 10-10-2012 11:18 AM

How about "Fun for everybody is" to keep with your pointlessly inverted word order in line five? Alternately, "I live in this jungle gym" keeps the facile rhyme scheme intact without injecting the pointlessly inverted word order.

peace

treborillusion 10-11-2012 01:06 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by #1 synth

You mean we could embed youtube videos? on UG...

It's like Christmas.

#1 synth 10-11-2012 10:29 AM

this is the first time i have ever tried. suffice to say as soon as i realized i broke out the champagne!


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