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TheWho845 10-20-2012 11:58 PM

Song about my self
 
Just a little self assessment, if anyone is interested I could record it and post it. Its one of my writings I actually like, mostly because i just wrote it..



You


You've got
high hopes for a wonderful world
You've got
High hopes for the people there

But c'mon
What do you really
think of them

You put your soul
in a wooden box
You put your Heart
another one too
How could you
Every feeling you've ever had

You're feeling crazy
and you want to shout
You're feeling sad
And you want to pout
How about you
Let it all out

You hide your feelings
from your deepest friends
You hide your feelings
and you like to pretend
Do you really
Think you'd lose them To yourself?

FrozenNile 10-21-2012 12:14 AM

I like it! It sounds like it could be a great acoustic piece.

TheWho845 10-21-2012 12:18 AM

Thanks, it probably will be acoustic. It's the best thing I've ever written in my opinion.

whywefight 10-21-2012 02:08 AM

I like these lyrics, straight up and honest.

TVDDC 10-21-2012 04:50 AM

You know, when i read lyrics i'm always curious on what kind of track it is. i hope it is a acoustic song.

TheWho845 10-21-2012 11:32 AM

I wrote it on my acoustic and its hot a finger picked guitar solo of the chord progression so it definitely will be acoustic. Thanks for the feedback

disrurbedbro 10-22-2012 10:36 PM

Great job i think a slow fingerstyle acoustic backing will set you up for some bigtine sucsess


Can you help me write stuff like this.......straightforward and honest?

TheWho845 10-23-2012 05:56 PM

Uh we'll you sort of just right it out lol

arthur_s 11-02-2012 08:58 AM

Yes, record it with acoustic or harmonic accompaniment. Forum will listen to you:)

lububble17 11-10-2012 01:20 AM

This is truly beautiful! i really wish i could hear it :)

disrurbedbro 12-08-2012 02:32 PM

Hey, I came up with a way of converting tose lyrics into a hardcore/metal sound....Is it ok If i record myself doing this in my way? You have your ways and i can have mine.....noone is hurt....it is a new style that i am trying...Again...good song, but if i may please try this out in a way that i play on my own


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