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JimiJamesThe2nd 10-30-2012 09:00 PM

Fulgur Urbem
 
incandescent luminary tombstone
stitched upon black and purple felted skyline
changing now to light brown and faded gray-greens
returning now to home and all those delicate home-things
quietly floating down I-35 in a coma or a day dream
A tailor traces softly along an unwritten seam
fingers pitched and poised for irreverent exchange of breathing
bracing now for Winter and a subtle deconstruction of my being
incandescent luminary tombstone
how glad I am that it's you that I've been seeing.

Flevi 10-30-2012 09:04 PM

This makes me feel cold and damp, I read it like a rap song for some reason, I like it

JimiJamesThe2nd 11-02-2012 02:59 AM

Thanks, Flev. Anything from anyone would be entirely welcomed, too. I don't write much anymore. I need to know how bad I've gotten.


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