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treborillusion 11-14-2012 10:45 PM

It's Cold Outside
 
Sitting
In my room
Just bitching
What can I do
It's cold
Outside
I'm confined
It's true
Haven't got a car
Parked and no I
Don't drive
It's cold outside
Can't afford
To go out
Plus I look Bruck too
Gotta clean up
That's what I'm
Gonna do
You don't need money
All you need
Is you

vintage x metal 11-16-2012 03:40 PM

there's one verse. now write another four. :)
rhyme structure needs room for complexity to develop within the poem, so have fun with it.

lillianyang 11-17-2012 03:23 AM

Hi, I usually donít post comments. But, I had to say this was a really good post.great, agree with your idea!


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