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g0ze 11-20-2012 10:19 AM

Still Ascending (Gp5) Metalcore
 
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A song i wrote for an upcoming album.

guitar_jew 11-20-2012 05:07 PM



Everything but the chorus is awesome. Chorus doesn't work for me because of the link. You'll hear what I mean, I think, in the first few seconds.

Other than that, sure, it's well constructed, it stays away from most genericore cliches, not really much wrong with it. Structure was a bit predictable, but that's nit picking.

C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1566286

frankibo 11-20-2012 08:38 PM

You wouldn't happen to like Architects would you?

g0ze 11-20-2012 09:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by frankibo
You wouldn't happen to like Architects would you?

Why you ask?

frankibo 11-21-2012 06:25 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by g0ze
Why you ask?


I reckon I can point out 3 or 4 things about this song, possibly more, that are directly and strongly influenced by Architects songs. Whilst the end product doesn't sounds exactly like them, for a fan it's quite clear it see.

Gageycakes 11-21-2012 12:10 PM

So very Architects. Not a bad thing though.

If I were you I'd separate the chord voicing over the two guitars. I was wearing headphones and my ears were blew off from how much was going on especially in the chorus with the string ensemble. It's just too much. I think it would sound better too.

Apart from that I like it.


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