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weorge 12-08-2012 12:59 PM

My heart's not in this no more - C4C
 
Another song of mine, it will make an appearance as the closing song on an album I really need to get round to finishing,

Anyway let me know what you think and I'll do the same for one of your songs :)


xghost88 12-08-2012 01:13 PM

i think the verse parts are pretty good! But you're not in time on the (pre-)chorus strumming parts, plus for my taste your voice is getting a little too crass there, especially the shift from C#m to Bm sounds very rough. But maybe that's just me. But lots of potential there!

aaron aardvark 12-08-2012 05:29 PM

weorge,
Guitar playing is very good. Vocals during the verse are very good, during the chorus they are good. Too bad you coughed. The song itself is quite good. As Elvis Costello said, "He can't be wounded because he has no heart". Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...90#post30711690

zymn 12-10-2012 05:03 AM

You resemble and sound like the lead singer of Cage The Elephant, in a way. You're in luck because I friggin love Cage The Elephant. Good voice, awesome guitar. I approve. Better than what I've got going.

Have a listen? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1577045


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