never crossed lovers
We lived in a space between now and then
held in tenderness of when
feeling left alone
with grace of God
embraced your bones
times won’t hold the wills of if
not when it takes your soul and binds your pith
you lost me to if
Now couldn’t hold you
Sooner became an uncrossable sea.
Amazing. Very well done.
If I had to criticise something, it would be the line "not when it takes your soul and binds your pith". I somehow get stuck on that one every time I read it.
good shit man
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