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blake1221 01-31-2013 03:13 AM

gallows
 
Oh, it is just like us to swing from the gallows.
Never matching each otherís rhythm,
Never finding unison.
In death, I am mocked for things I could never be in life.

Itís as becoming as the bag over your head.
Itís as fitting as the noose around my neck.

the bartender 01-31-2013 03:27 AM

This deserves a round of applause.

:golfclap: :golfclap: :golfclap: :golfclap: :golfclap: :golfclap:

blake1221 02-05-2013 12:19 AM

Oh, forgot about this. Anything to critique?


Something feels....slightly clumsy about the middle.

To me, at least.


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