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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-27-2013, 01:16 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 291
Posted By GoodVibrations
I sort of feel like the rhymes are a little...

I sort of feel like the rhymes are a little forced or a little contrived, "inside/hide," you know, that type of thing. I LOVE the idea of those poem though, and the images it evokes. I also like that...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-27-2013, 12:57 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 163
Posted By GoodVibrations
Golden Gravel

Let me preface this by saying, I haven't written poetry or posted on UG in about a year. Nothing has inspired me to that extent, I guess. In light of recent events, however, I've gotten back into...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-21-2012, 09:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 308
Posted By GoodVibrations
I want to start off by saying that i really like...

I want to start off by saying that i really like this. I think the concept of the "corners of my mind" can be kind of cliche and contrived at times, but I think you used it well, for the most part....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 09:14 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 507
Posted By GoodVibrations
My French teacher begs to differ.

My French teacher begs to differ.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 07:40 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 507
Posted By GoodVibrations
*Le petit mort

*Le petit mort
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 04:24 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 214
Posted By GoodVibrations
Its not supposed to be a song, so... mission...

Its not supposed to be a song, so... mission accomplished.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-18-2012, 10:35 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 157
Posted By GoodVibrations
Wow... that was amazing. Honestly. You sound...

Wow... that was amazing. Honestly. You sound somewhat like Dave Matthews (which in my opinion is a very high compliment) Keep it up. For real. :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-18-2012, 10:33 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 214
Posted By GoodVibrations
The UPS Truck Just Drove By

Pretty sure there are no words
To explain the way
Watching us implode feels.
Iíll try anyway.
Imagine the sun,
Except seventeen times hotter and larger,
Falling out of space,
Throwing the planets...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-29-2011, 07:01 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 153
Posted By GoodVibrations
Pretty Facade (revised)

Isnít it great?
Her pretty faÁade,
Falsely put in place
But not at all odd.
Isnít it wonderful?
Her charming pain,
Used in defense
But nothingís to gain.
Wouldnít you like
To open her up?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-29-2011, 06:28 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 267
Posted By GoodVibrations
Thanks for the crit. :) And yeah, i know it needs...

Thanks for the crit. :) And yeah, i know it needs work. I almost never revise anything, so your help and generally other people's help is really all i go on to fix things.

Also, i love the poem that...
Forum: The Pit 12-21-2011, 11:11 PM
Replies: 91
Views: 1,803
Posted By GoodVibrations
me too, dawg. (<<<<< that's...

me too, dawg. (<<<<< that's another guilty pleasure. i love saying dawg, but i'm a white girl from wisconsin, so it's just wrong most of the time)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-19-2011, 10:58 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 559
Posted By GoodVibrations
I love this. It totally made me lawl. :) I love...

I love this. It totally made me lawl. :) I love that it's just a poem... It's nothing special but it's amazing at the same time. I love how it's just what it is, take it at face value and it's great....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-19-2011, 10:50 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 267
Posted By GoodVibrations
It Sucks.

Haven't written much since i wrote those Haiku... so i figured i'd give it another shot. This isn't a haiku, obviously, it's just a random slew of words i guess. Nothing is editted, this is just what...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-06-2011, 09:18 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 228
Posted By GoodVibrations
i was trying for the 5,7,5 syllable pattern... i...

i was trying for the 5,7,5 syllable pattern... i actually dont know much about haiku at all, but i know the most common is 5,7,5, so that's what i went with.... And thanks :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-06-2011, 09:02 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 228
Posted By GoodVibrations
A Few Haiku

"Time ticks by so slow
Torturing we loverís minds
Canít we take our time?"

"Boys like to kiss girls
Girls rarely kiss boys they like
Cooties are just gross."

"Youíre a bright zap light
And Iím just...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2011, 04:51 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 283
Posted By GoodVibrations
Um, thanks for the crit, 7harris7?

Um, thanks for the crit, 7harris7?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-17-2011, 01:46 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 252
Posted By GoodVibrations
I don't understand why no one else has...

I don't understand why no one else has commented/critted for you, because in my opinion, this is really good... I love the whole unidentified "you" in poems/prose/whatever this is supposed to be. And...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-17-2011, 01:20 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 283
Posted By GoodVibrations
Talking First Grade Rhyme Time

I just wrote this in like, literally, 10 minutes, so... forgive me. :)

Life was easier in first grade
Learning to rhyme at my little brown desk
It was a great trade.
We were praised for rhyming...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-04-2011, 09:01 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 286
Posted By GoodVibrations
Overall, i really like it! I don't mind the lack...

Overall, i really like it! I don't mind the lack of puncuation, because i don't use it much when i write either. :P

The "head" and "bled" in the 3rd stanza was kind of distracting just because it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-04-2011, 12:38 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 253
Posted By GoodVibrations
A Poem Edgar Allen Poe would Hate

Behind every man there is a woman
Just as under every rock there is moss
Or an ugly earthworm
Insipidly sticking his head out of the dirt to taste
The fresh summer air.

With love thereís a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2011, 09:27 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 569
Posted By GoodVibrations
I loved you on four posters of a canopy bed. I...

I loved you on four posters of a canopy bed.
I loved you between your grass and my sand.
I loved you between your silence and my static.
I loved you when I didn't want to.

i LOVED this part. By far...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2011, 09:21 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 192
Posted By GoodVibrations
Yeah, it's not my style either, which is weird...

Yeah, it's not my style either, which is weird because i didnt even really know where it was coming from when i wrote it. Like, i do have a major thing for acoustic guitars, but in more of the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2011, 09:06 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 323
Posted By GoodVibrations
I love this because i can hear it in my head as...

I love this because i can hear it in my head as i'm reading it, you know? like i know exactly how i'd make it sound if i were to be the one playing/singing it. (and it's probably WAY different than...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2011, 08:47 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 836
Posted By GoodVibrations
I really really REALLY like it! :) I can't think...

I really really REALLY like it! :) I can't think of anything to correct or improve upon, because it's so cute the way it is. (cute? that's such a lame word, i'm sorry) But yeah... I like the "know...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2011, 08:40 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 192
Posted By GoodVibrations
Acoustic Guitar

Its that acoustic guitar
That gets me every single time
When you play it just right
It makes me wanna fly
Singing your songs
Waiting on love
Knowing that maybe someday
Iíll be the one youíre...
Forum: The Pit 11-28-2010, 09:35 PM
Replies: 7,839
Views: 86,456
Posted By GoodVibrations
Hi. I'm GoodVibrations. ;) ifyouknowwhatimean....

Hi. I'm GoodVibrations. ;) ifyouknowwhatimean. I'm a little e-stupid, so i dont know how to do those nifty little things that go below all your posts, so yeah. If there's an e-man out there who likes...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-28-2010, 09:12 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 286
Posted By GoodVibrations
It's almost as fun to read as it was to listen...

It's almost as fun to read as it was to listen to. :) Don't argue with me, Herby.
On the recording, you sounded like you were saying "I pray we're never apart" instead of how it's written as "never...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2010, 07:14 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 236
Posted By GoodVibrations
A Mistake?

Ususally i post poetry, but i haven't posted in a really long time, and i didn't feel like writing a poem today, so i just wrote this. I haven't revised it or anything yet, it's still an infant i...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2010, 11:34 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 414
Posted By GoodVibrations
I dont know what those people above me are...

I dont know what those people above me are thinking, but i like it! I mean, sure, it's cliche, but in a good way, you know? I think it sounds romantic... (and from a girls prospective) i'm sure every...
Forum: The Pit 08-15-2010, 11:10 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 1,067
Posted By GoodVibrations
Gaylord... and Javier... But mostly Gaylord...

Gaylord... and Javier... But mostly Gaylord...
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