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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-21-2013, 03:36 AM
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still in Dawson City, Yukon Territory. looks like...
still in Dawson City, Yukon Territory. looks like it's my new home, ah! |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-21-2013, 02:24 AM
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Replies: 1,628
Views: 48,881
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cory, how have you been man? jimmy, I know it's...
cory, how have you been man? jimmy, I know it's been a while but did you make it to Alaska at all after all? |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-21-2013, 01:35 AM
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Replies: 1,628
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-06-2012, 08:20 AM
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Replies: 1,628
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests
04-19-2012, 03:26 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 1,263
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sorry, stuff came up. really wish i could have....
sorry, stuff came up. really wish i could have. moved town, etc. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-08-2012, 06:49 PM
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Replies: 1,628
Views: 48,881
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OK dude where in Alaska? I'm in the Yukon...
OK dude where in Alaska? I'm in the Yukon Territory all summer long, less than 2 hours from some alaskan cities. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests
04-03-2012, 01:30 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 1,263
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests
03-27-2012, 04:05 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 1,263
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-27-2012, 03:47 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 290
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same here. I thought you were pulling in...
same here. I thought you were pulling in different directions at first but the ending looks pretty much flawless to me. Actually, the more I re-read this, the more I like it. I'm happy to have... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-27-2012, 03:38 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 330
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hey, hi. this is different. To be honest, I have...
hey, hi. this is different. To be honest, I have a few qualms with this. Mainly, this is really missing closure to me. Either more of a punchline, or an extra stanza to wrap it up I think could help.... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-27-2012, 03:26 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 689
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I don't know how much you altered this already,...
I don't know how much you altered this already, but the roughness works incredibly well. I had not connected with your pieces this much in a long time. Great to read you once again. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-18-2012, 08:40 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 793
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-13-2012, 02:27 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 380
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WotW - Dawson
North enough. Montreal is calling in all sorts of familiar voices, but I've been long warned and prepared I've spoken with giants. some standing bare, others decorated with magnificient... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-01-2011, 12:39 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 410
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-29-2011, 06:57 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 410
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WotW - paddling on asphalt
guidance is a lost concept unless you're okay with ****ing around endlessly- most people are- until chance brings you back where you were supposed to be in the first place, which you were trying to... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-22-2011, 11:47 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 381
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really nice. really nice. I believe everything...
really nice. really nice. I believe everything you wrote here. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-22-2011, 11:35 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 458
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leaves should be leave in first stanza. I thought...
leaves should be leave in first stanza. I thought the second stanza was a bit too wordy and simplistic. it's like an interlude in your elocution. wouldn't say it's a good thing. other than that,... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-22-2011, 03:43 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 366
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a few words from Costa Rica, came home, everyone...
a few words from Costa Rica, came home, everyone passed out, felt like I had to come on here to read something in particular and it obviously was this piece. Very moving, thrusting, threathening.... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-09-2010, 05:46 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 258
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I liked this. It was believable. The flow was...
I liked this. It was believable. The flow was natural and there's close to nothing in there that feels forced. nice little read. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-02-2010, 06:27 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 175
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holy shit, man.
good job on that, very tough to...
holy shit, man. good job on that, very tough to pull up. damn. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-11-2010, 04:05 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 281
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-09-2010, 06:32 PM
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Replies: 2,713
Views: 52,342
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just bring your favorite, that's what everybody...
just bring your favorite, that's what everybody does. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-08-2010, 01:11 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 281
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Novembre
I spent a night perched on the front balcony waiting for the first snow of seven years ago lighting rollie after rollie ; there's smoke in my memories and cold and mouths, young mouths warm like... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
09-06-2010, 07:42 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 316
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some of this isn't up to your usual standard....
some of this isn't up to your usual standard. Mainly the ending and fourth stanza. that being said, I like the pace of it. although it's tripping on itself a big towards the end, it keeps moving... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-26-2010, 01:00 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 437
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I encourage you to post more. I've always enjoyed...
I encourage you to post more. I've always enjoyed reading you very much. whats been said, the naive shit that my stupid head can't stand like where i'm at this moment. I don't think this could... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-16-2010, 03:49 PM
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Replies: 2,713
Views: 52,342
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-17-2010, 04:32 PM
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Replies: 2,713
Views: 52,342
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-15-2010, 05:44 PM
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Replies: 2,713
Views: 52,342
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I was just smoking a cigarette on the balcony...
I was just smoking a cigarette on the balcony looking at the neighbor and her two kids and I was thinking exactly that |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-10-2010, 07:33 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 368
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-04-2010, 03:08 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 411
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that's the main challenge really, and what I've...
that's the main challenge really, and what I've been working on all year long with my project on many many pieces I never ended up posting here. the toughest part is being consistent in tone, even... |
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