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Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories
06-06-2008, 09:44 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 279
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Pete Murray#1
Amp for Acoustic Guitar
Hi there, looking at purchasing an acoustic amp, I've never purchased an amp before (always just borrowed people's) and am looking for something pretty good, but hopefully under AUS$2000. A friend... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-24-2008, 07:49 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 308
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Pete Murray#1
solid, with some definite potential. Some really...
solid, with some definite potential. Some really good starts were let down by some disappointingly forced rhymes in the following... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-21-2008, 08:37 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 417
Posted By
Pete Murray#1
My favourite piece of yours that I've read Jamie,...
My favourite piece of yours that I've read Jamie, really well done! C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=766438 Thanks mate Sam |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-20-2008, 06:07 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 395
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Pete Murray#1
overall its a decent effort, especially if its...
overall its a decent effort, especially if its your first attempt. Its not horrible and its not spectacular. There are loads of cliches (i'm guilty of that too) and a few lines are a little so-so... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-20-2008, 08:55 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 355
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Pete Murray#1
Imagination on a Screen
Imagination on a Screen Music and Lyrics by Sam Dutney and Annie Bingley I’ve been sitting round for way too long And the world just seems to be Getting smaller by the minute There are lives in... |
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Forum: Tab Talk
01-18-2008, 11:11 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 115
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Pete Murray#1
Tab Request: Left Behind - Jeremy Fisher
Just wondering if anyone knows where I can find a tab for Left Behind y Jeremy Fisher off the album Goodbye Blue Monday? Thanks if you can help and thanks anyway even if you can't :) |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-05-2007, 06:36 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 527
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Pete Murray#1
Thanks to every one who has submitted feedback,...
Thanks to every one who has submitted feedback, much appreciated. Especially thanks to jamie for the detailed crit, you're 100% right in that this song isn't intended for consumption outside of... |
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Forum: Alternative & Indie
12-05-2007, 08:09 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 136
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Pete Murray#1
Anyone a fan of Jeremy Fisher?
Just wondering if anyone here is a fan of Jeremy Fisher, saw him live on Monday as the support act for Xavier Rudd and he was pretty good, got his album 'Goodbye Blue Monday' and now i'm hooked :D |
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Forum: Musician Ads
12-05-2007, 08:02 AM
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Replies: 1,351
Views: 82,129
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Pete Murray#1
Moving down to brisbane in January and looking to...
Moving down to brisbane in January and looking to find some people to jam with, I'm mostly into surf/folk/easy listening style acoustic (think Jack Johnson, Matt Costa, the Beautiful Girls, Pete... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 10:35 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 233
Posted By
Pete Murray#1
I really liked this piece, plenty of different...
I really liked this piece, plenty of different ways to read it and a lovely flow. I really loved the third stanza, that classic image of the angel on one shoulder and the devil on the other really... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 10:00 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 158
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Pete Murray#1
I think it does need a bit of work, in particular...
I think it does need a bit of work, in particular as you said there's no chorus. For a pop-punk song the chorus is essential so I think you should focus on putting together a good chorus to... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 09:30 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 611
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Pete Murray#1
I really liked this piece, I'm not going to...
I really liked this piece, I'm not going to provide a stanza-by-stanza crit for this one because I don't feel it's necessary. There's a lovely feel encassing the whole piece and the last stanza in... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 08:35 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 315
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Pete Murray#1
you did a good job overall, what i particularly...
you did a good job overall, what i particularly liked was the way the rhymes flowed so well. A few things maybe consider as I said above but overall it was quite good. C4C?... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 07:26 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 423
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Pete Murray#1
well I've been away from the forums for almost a...
well I've been away from the forums for almost a year but I still recall your old pieces having much more pizzaz (sp) still it works as what it is with the exception of the one stanza mentioned. It... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 07:15 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 655
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Pete Murray#1
really good piece overall, good angle, some great...
really good piece overall, good angle, some great lines. Admittedly some of it needs some more polish IMO but definately an excellent start c4c?... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 07:05 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 266
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Pete Murray#1
overall I actually really liked this piece, to me...
overall I actually really liked this piece, to me there's something beautiful about a simple strong that isn't riddled with complexity and metaphors, that simply expresses an emotion in a... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 06:59 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 473
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Pete Murray#1
a pretty good piece overall, a line or two that...
a pretty good piece overall, a line or two that doesn't seem quite right to me but that aside it looks very sharp c4c? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=727998 If you'd be so kind |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 10:42 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 239
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Pete Murray#1
Really don't have much to add here, it's a...
Really don't have much to add here, it's a definate example of how less can be more. A good solid piece that i certainly wouldn't mind hearing a recording of c4c?... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 10:22 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 457
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Pete Murray#1
a good piece overall, the theme is strong...
a good piece overall, the theme is strong throughout and I can hear it in my head sounding pretty damn good with the right music behind it c4c?... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 10:15 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 360
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Pete Murray#1
Very strong piece, powerful throughout without...
Very strong piece, powerful throughout without being over-simplified or too complicated, a very happy medium. Really good piece c4c?... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2007, 10:08 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 527
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Pete Murray#1
Kimberley (If I was)
At the end of the year I'm leaving my town to go and study in Brisbane which means I have to leave my girlfriend (who's a year younger than me and still at school) behind. Since she wants to go to a... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-25-2007, 07:09 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 384
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Overall quite a good piece, some flow problems at...
Overall quite a good piece, some flow problems at times but nothing that isn't eminently (sp?) fixable. cheers Sam |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-25-2007, 07:12 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 134
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Pete Murray#1
The River
This is my first go at songwriting in almost a year so go to town on it Crit for crit of course The River (tentatively titled) (Verse 1) I wake up early morning Alarm pulls me from my sleep I walk... |
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Forum: Tab Talk
04-18-2007, 05:00 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 666
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Pete Murray#1
Chris Smither - No Love Today
Anybody know where I can find a tab of this? There isn't one here at UG (obviously or else I wouldn't haveto ask), really want to get a tab for this but so far my searches have proved fruitless (if... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-29-2007, 04:48 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 264
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Pete Murray#1
Good finish, slight change to the bridge.
This...
Good finish, slight change to the bridge. This was really awesome, first and 3rd verses were great, chorus was pretty good, bridges weren't so flash. Still this was a pretty awesme song and it was... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-29-2007, 04:40 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 277
Posted By
Pete Murray#1
Good finish
Not bad, the first two verses arent...
Good finish Not bad, the first two verses arent great but the rest is very good. raise the bar on the first two verses and this would be outstanding. Please have a look at mine, "Good Company",... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-29-2007, 06:10 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 225
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Pete Murray#1
Good piece, might be a bit short though... not...
Good piece, might be a bit short though... not really sure, but it reads very well and I liked it. Please have a look at mine "Good Company" link in my sig. Cheers -Sam |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-27-2007, 07:16 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 238
Posted By
Pete Murray#1
I like the repetition of the chorus at the...
I like the repetition of the chorus at the end. PLenty of interpretations for this, some more obvious than others. I like this piece, its left open to the reader/listener to discern the meaning... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-25-2007, 10:41 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 526
Posted By
Pete Murray#1
Actually you missed mine,
link is here...
Actually you missed mine, link is here http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=508877 Cheers Jamie -Sam |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-25-2007, 12:06 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 526
Posted By
Pete Murray#1
I liked this a lot, it was different for sure but...
I liked this a lot, it was different for sure but I liked it. I laughed so hard at the 'mind out for death' part I just thought that was hilarious, I haven't heard someone say that since I was about... |
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