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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-21-2015, 01:21 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 161
Posted By #1 synth
agreed on the title. I think you could do some...

agreed on the title. I think you could do some cool things with the title and second stanza. A new title could really transform this piece. I really love what you're doing here with flow, content,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2015, 01:56 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 144
Posted By #1 synth
At Your Funeral, Reading from the Pulpit

At Your Funeral, Reading from the Pulpit

About the willow trees that grew in the park near your house
when we were seventeen and still teething on each otherís rough edges.

I couldnít finish,
there...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2015, 01:55 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 161
Posted By #1 synth
that first stanza I have mixed feelings about....

that first stanza I have mixed feelings about. don't even know if its needed. That second one though, thats something special. thanks for posting this man
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-15-2015, 11:47 AM
Replies: 2,140
Views: 71,105
Posted By #1 synth
this place almost single handedly brought me...

this place almost single handedly brought me through my teenage depression. made some friends, lost some friends, still in touch with a few people on here. but this place will be in my internet...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-04-2015, 05:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 322
Posted By #1 synth
publish plz

publish plz
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-04-2015, 05:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 406
Posted By #1 synth
:heart:

:heart:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-04-2015, 05:20 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 351
Posted By #1 synth
:cheers:

:cheers:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-27-2014, 11:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 392
Posted By #1 synth
i'm just going to keep awkwardly liking your...

i'm just going to keep awkwardly liking your facebook pictures. don't mind me. happy thanksgiving man.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-16-2014, 06:26 PM
Replies: 2,140
Views: 71,105
Posted By #1 synth
you guys are great. love you all.

you guys are great. love you all.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-17-2014, 08:50 PM
Replies: 2,140
Views: 71,105
Posted By #1 synth
:cheers:

:cheers:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-22-2014, 11:32 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 225
Posted By #1 synth
great stuff

great stuff
Forum: The Pit 08-22-2014, 11:35 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 947
Posted By #1 synth
it is a crime that we cause so much suffering by...

it is a crime that we cause so much suffering by not allowing those with terminal illnesses the freedom to have agency over their own death. I've worked at a hospital for a long time. There is...
Forum: The Pit 08-22-2014, 11:33 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 802
Posted By #1 synth
when hotpunksk8rgrl still invades your...

when hotpunksk8rgrl still invades your dreams/nightmares
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-07-2014, 09:25 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 428
Posted By #1 synth
hey man, are your songs recorded anywhere?

hey man, are your songs recorded anywhere?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-07-2014, 09:20 PM
Replies: 2,140
Views: 71,105
Posted By #1 synth
Hey man, I hope you're doing alright. Keeping you...

Hey man, I hope you're doing alright. Keeping you in my thoughts.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-07-2014, 09:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 324
Posted By #1 synth
Necessary Conclusions

The pills donít help
The dementia
Is real
She forgets
On the way to buy gin
From the bodega

Magazine told her white raisins
Soaked in liquor
Help the dialysis
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-26-2014, 07:19 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 788
Posted By #1 synth
killer ending

killer ending
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-15-2014, 10:10 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 395
Posted By #1 synth
jareddddd. sweet.

jareddddd. sweet.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-05-2014, 06:26 PM
Replies: 2,140
Views: 71,105
Posted By #1 synth
I STARTED AN AWESOME NEW LITERARY MAGAZINE....

I STARTED AN AWESOME NEW LITERARY MAGAZINE. SUBMISSIONS OPEN. PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND LIKE OUR FACEBOOK PAGE YO! https://www.facebook.com/PelorusPress
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-26-2014, 05:50 PM
Replies: 2,140
Views: 71,105
Posted By #1 synth
yes. also, reading poetry at events is a tricky...

yes. also, reading poetry at events is a tricky business. I would not read that particular poem at a wedding. takes away from the celebration. but only you know best.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-20-2014, 12:38 PM
Replies: 2,140
Views: 71,105
Posted By #1 synth
if you ever want me to look at a chapbook draft,...

if you ever want me to look at a chapbook draft, feel free to email me at dylandebelis@gmail.com
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-20-2014, 12:37 PM
Replies: 2,140
Views: 71,105
Posted By #1 synth
I'm in the process of trying to get a chapbook...

I'm in the process of trying to get a chapbook and full manuscript published. It's hell on earth and costs a shitload in reading fees. But if you're dedicated, are willing to constantly evolve your...
Forum: The Pit 05-15-2014, 10:54 AM
Replies: 288
Views: 6,194
Posted By #1 synth
hotpunksk8rgrl

hotpunksk8rgrl
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-01-2014, 09:33 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 494
Posted By #1 synth
I think you could hit this one harder. missing...

I think you could hit this one harder. missing some rougher edges i think. Still beautiful idea. Might be one to try in some sort of more form-based poem? A vilanelle or something similar could give...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-01-2014, 09:30 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 709
Posted By #1 synth
WotW: When God's People Hit the Road

We migrate over the face of chaos
Where Adidas melt to pack-rat dens.
We crawl like wraiths
Through candles spray-painted on the border wall.

High noon
Light burns through the prison slats.
Our...
Forum: The Pit 03-09-2014, 09:37 PM
Replies: 40,206
Views: 497,661
Posted By #1 synth
so, like, its cool that you guys are talking...

so, like, its cool that you guys are talking about LOTR and whatever but have you thought about

darksouls2darksouls2darksouls2

get amped....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 03-09-2014, 07:42 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 543
Posted By #1 synth
let it be known that Keeno is the king of titles....

let it be known that Keeno is the king of titles. That said, I have to go Jimi. It's very calm
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-09-2014, 07:38 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 454
Posted By #1 synth
this was great. glad you're still around!

this was great. glad you're still around!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-09-2014, 07:26 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 431
Posted By #1 synth
for a long while I was worried that our poetry...

for a long while I was worried that our poetry will always be influenced by the likes of Death Cab and Bright Eyes. I don't worry about that too much anymore. We are champions of a forgotten age Jimi...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-09-2014, 07:22 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 414
Posted By #1 synth
WotW: Scorpio

Scorpio,

If it is at all possible to jump the icebergs in the Hudson,
One bank to another,
Then one day I would like to try
To skip my bones like a smooth stone
Into a blood stream.
And when I fall...
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