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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-28-2011, 11:55 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 148
Posted By streetcarp19
thanks for the suggestions. I will look into them...

thanks for the suggestions. I will look into them and I think they are very heolpful. It is quite frusturating at times writing actual lyrics as oppose to thriving in free verse, and reading this...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-27-2011, 05:25 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 677
Posted By streetcarp19
I really dig the style that is on display here....

I really dig the style that is on display here. kind of brash and you can feel the load of life that people probably felt in the past quite easily here. I honestly wouldn't mind seeing it continue on...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-27-2011, 03:09 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 148
Posted By streetcarp19
Lexington Harbor 1682

lyrics for a kind of long folk song. one of the favorites of mine, song wise.

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Leave the sails down
when there is not a trade wind
we left the shore
at least two months ago.
prepared the maps
on...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-27-2011, 03:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 358
Posted By streetcarp19
yes, the mutitude of ideas were strangly well...

yes, the mutitude of ideas were strangly well sewn together, dare I say in an almost professional way...stanza two really strikes a chord, cause you start to realize if a guru's motivation is any...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-29-2011, 11:07 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 211
Posted By streetcarp19
It shows the frustration that I deal with that...

It shows the frustration that I deal with that most everyone seems to be living in a different reality than me. Not saying that my version is better or anything, just mine makes more sense to me but...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-29-2011, 03:33 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 211
Posted By streetcarp19
thanks guys. I'm glad it was of interest to you.

thanks guys. I'm glad it was of interest to you.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-28-2011, 02:37 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 211
Posted By streetcarp19
Dancing Under Lightning

Dancing Under Lightning

***
Parted my hair and creased the clothes
Shut the water off, and wipe my nose
Everybody has a place to be
Insulting to the point of make believe

Ripping through the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-28-2011, 02:34 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 320
Posted By streetcarp19
I don't know man, this for some reason didn't...

I don't know man, this for some reason didn't really do it for me. I guess the substance level was lacking, even though it might have been real personal. Sorry.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-06-2011, 06:49 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 244
Posted By streetcarp19
Noisy Towns

lyrics for a folk song

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I kept the stone
you wrapped in paper for me
beside the plastic shroud
Outraged that I
had made a tape recording
before we received the mail
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-06-2011, 06:46 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 214
Posted By streetcarp19
this is an interesting topic, one which I am sure...

this is an interesting topic, one which I am sure hits home with everybody is the lovely superficial world we live in nowadays. Oh well, I guess not everyone is like that, just sayin.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-06-2011, 06:42 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 236
Posted By streetcarp19
well done my friend. I think it is good as is,...

well done my friend. I think it is good as is, probably doesn't anything else.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-16-2011, 01:43 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 122
Posted By streetcarp19
Posies With No Ashes

another one of my songs to share...

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In the shallows
of our anger
limp across the grass lawn
with no favors
Negativity
is the silence
that flicks us in the face
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-01-2011, 10:25 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 162
Posted By streetcarp19
Wolfboy

An acoustic finger picking song in D minor


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There wasn't really any reason to leave
but I packed it all up
In a wad about
the size of a tub

Into the timber where the grasses had grown
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-21-2011, 01:21 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 238
Posted By streetcarp19
thanks for the comments man. I will try and look...

thanks for the comments man. I will try and look for one of yours.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-17-2011, 02:23 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 238
Posted By streetcarp19
Lasting Residue

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Seen so much these last 5 years
At least since I've woken up
Looking back through the smoke screens
When all feelings became sunk
We weren't meant to know
some things I guess dear

Caught me up...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-02-2011, 02:05 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 125
Posted By streetcarp19
Jumproom

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Sneaking off the Jump-room to Mars
Like it was planned all along
have to find somewhere to sleep
like we had worked on before

Just because your dad was high up
in one of those secret groups
The...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2010, 04:38 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 259
Posted By streetcarp19
Thanks you guys. Very kind words

Thanks you guys. Very kind words
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2010, 09:28 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 259
Posted By streetcarp19
Womb (Promised Love)

one of my better folk songs ive written lately, at least i think. Thanks for any comments!

***
We skip along on top of the roofs
And feel the breeze in the holes of our masks
I give away most...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2010, 09:20 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 362
Posted By streetcarp19
yes, this is a nice example of escapism, with the...

yes, this is a nice example of escapism, with the birds not singing, and that conflict, that at least always boils in me between sprawl and nature. Nice example of a meditative type of mind being...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2010, 09:14 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 179
Posted By streetcarp19
I like the mysteriousness of this, and that is...

I like the mysteriousness of this, and that is really all i can say. I leaves you with a cold feeling, but a good one. I guess that could be a result of it being OTS, but doesn't mean i like it any...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-18-2010, 06:24 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 193
Posted By streetcarp19
hey, thanks. I will be posting some more lyrics...

hey, thanks. I will be posting some more lyrics to some of my recent songs, so keep an eye out. I am glad you liked it.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-17-2010, 03:16 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 360
Posted By streetcarp19
I feel a pretty strong brain wash/conspiracy type...

I feel a pretty strong brain wash/conspiracy type vibe going on here, even though it might not be what you were going for. you tapped into a subject that could be taken pretty deep into the shallow...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-17-2010, 04:29 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 193
Posted By streetcarp19
Metronome

Holy crap it has been forever since i last posted...oh well, this is an actual song not just poetry. enjoy!


***
Passing time with a metronome

Until I can see out the back of my dome

Can't...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-31-2009, 10:08 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 197
Posted By streetcarp19
yeah, i had the urge to keep writing on this, but...

yeah, i had the urge to keep writing on this, but i figure i didn't know if i would stop very soon, so where i did seemed as good as any. thanks for the comments, and i did take a look at yours.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-31-2009, 02:47 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 412
Posted By streetcarp19
I like the confusion you give the protaganist in...

I like the confusion you give the protaganist in this, from the various lines that you say one thing, and then in the next, turn around and say the opposite. Whether it was intentional or not, it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-31-2009, 02:17 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 835
Posted By streetcarp19
what a read man...I will probably need a few more...

what a read man...I will probably need a few more run throughs to fully grasp the vastness here. there is just so much one could pay attention to here and absorb, and truely think about and relate to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-31-2009, 05:33 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 242
Posted By streetcarp19
yeah, you tied it up all pretty well, and an...

yeah, you tied it up all pretty well, and an interesting perspective on how one should handle torment in ones life. The subject here understands that repression probably isn;t the best way to deal...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-31-2009, 05:25 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 197
Posted By streetcarp19
Leftover Fragments

***
In response to the complications
you yourself have cursed
I propose the linear analogy
that silences even words.

Meet upon a mountain top
with the answers in your hand,
cast a stone across the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-31-2009, 05:05 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 494
Posted By streetcarp19
I like how you were able to talk about nebulas...

I like how you were able to talk about nebulas and super models in the same stanza, and actually make it work. I guess it was just the contrasts of the two that really set it off, and must give you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-28-2009, 03:15 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 204
Posted By streetcarp19
yeah, i was going for simple and to the point,...

yeah, i was going for simple and to the point, but i know what you mean.
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