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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-25-2014, 12:13 PM
Replies: 0
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Posted By Greymane
In Seeming Bliss

Is there any space of time
defined to seal a breach?
Are there any helping lines
for damage out of reach?

Will you ever hear the bells
of grace over your door?
It's been too long to know the...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-10-2013, 11:00 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 99
Posted By Greymane
Concept - Reflections (Acoustic Version) C4C

Hi there,

as our Drummer wasn't in for rehearsal a few month ago, we decided to record an acoustic version of one of the songs we were working on by the time. Any critics are really appreciated, if...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-01-2009, 08:55 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 149
Posted By Greymane
thanks a lot for that critic , it was really...

thanks a lot for that critic , it was really helpful , i'm thinking of a few changes at the moment but it will take some time to see what really fits most , some of the phrasing and syllable number...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-01-2009, 07:41 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 149
Posted By Greymane
Upto The Coldness Behind

Hey there, this is a lyric I recently came up with when we had the first snow here in germany, it's quite open for interpretation but it heeds into the direction ob becoming dumb as you grow older....
Forum: Original Recordings 10-13-2009, 05:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 111
Posted By Greymane
mindtrap solo

hey folks, i just recorded on of our bandsī song's solos
let me know what you think of it

C4C of course

Mindtrap Solo (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m-l9qz_dNd8)
Forum: Original Recordings 07-26-2009, 06:03 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 113
Posted By Greymane
Melancholy Blues I + II

Two short pieces I recently recorded , not exactly the same style as there were about 5 month between writing them , I'd appreciate any kind of criticism ,
but remember what you gibe is what you will...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 05-07-2009, 06:30 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 160
Posted By Greymane
Guitar Solo Backing [gp4;gp5,MIDI] C4C

last night i came up with some ideas for a guiar solo mainly concerning the backing track , I'd be very mich interested in what you think about it, all thought on the backing track , changes in the...
Forum: Original Recordings 03-05-2009, 06:07 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 148
Posted By Greymane
actually it'S not very.. inventive .. the chord...

actually it'S not very.. inventive .. the chord progression is just a bit lame , i mean if this is really very personal to you , why don't you put some more effort into it an get some nice chord...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 03-05-2009, 04:11 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 470
Posted By Greymane
Thanks for that crit dude , it was very helpful...

Thanks for that crit dude , it was very helpful ..



actually i tried to develop this lick by picking it up in the base line in the interlude and throughout the first solo ...
concerning the solo...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-15-2009, 06:11 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 355
Posted By Greymane
using which program for the drums?

using which program for the drums?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 02-14-2009, 09:27 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 402
Posted By Greymane
Where do you write your Songs/Lyrics?

Actually I'd just be interested in where and how you write your songs or lyrics , I think acually the place of writing might have impact on the songs , actually I'd claim that some places are more or...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-29-2009, 12:07 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 557
Posted By Greymane
diggin up the old **** , I've added another verse...

diggin up the old **** , I've added another verse with some keyboard arpeggios , i'd really be interested in how you like it , actually I'd also be glad about some opinions on how to continue as I#M...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-26-2009, 03:27 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 473
Posted By Greymane
First of all thanks for your crit , I really...

First of all thanks for your crit , I really appreciated it though I have to say I can't really change the song the way you would as I just have one guitar in that band , but recording it I'll...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-26-2009, 03:05 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 304
Posted By Greymane
hav to agree wit immortal , actually it's not...

hav to agree wit immortal , actually it's not really a song but just one riff folowwing each other , also the transitions on't really seem to fit , especially the first one introducing the acoustic...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-24-2009, 08:07 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 397
Posted By Greymane
Critting in parts: Intro is cool , as said...

Critting in parts:

Intro is cool , as said before I'd also cut bar 7 and tkae the strum to the last 2 eights in bar 6

Dist -Intro: like how you keep the acoustic guitar , bass seems to be a bit...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-24-2009, 08:01 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 282
Posted By Greymane
wow , cool : in parts Intro: veery weird but...

wow , cool : in parts

Intro: veery weird but sounds great absolutly genius ! ;)
17-20 : nothing to complain about in here, like how you pick up the intro idea
21-24 : like the chord progression ,...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-23-2009, 09:33 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,801
Posted By Greymane
firts of all thanks for you crit , I really...

firts of all thanks for you crit , I really apreciated it!
to your song , well pretty much everything has been said , it's really good , i don't really go into depth now because it would be a waste...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-23-2009, 09:23 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 390
Posted By Greymane
well , the song is well structure , I definitly...

well , the song is well structure , I definitly don't like the off notes in the solo , but the part after the solo is great ... but i have to admit as others have already said the timing change...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-23-2009, 09:19 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 340
Posted By Greymane
well i really liked the idea , but there were a...

well i really liked the idea , but there were a few things i really don't know what to think about , I'm not sure if I'm really qualified to rate this kind o fmusic but I'll trie

Intro: Really...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-23-2009, 01:32 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 547
Posted By Greymane
hum , well i could see a lot of potential in...

hum , well i could see a lot of potential in there but actually you messed it up a bit ;)
in parts :

Intro , the idea is good but i don't like the repetition , maybe just try not to repeat the...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-23-2009, 12:48 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 470
Posted By Greymane
Identify (Progressive Rock) [Gp4; Gp5; MIDI] C4C

Whe yesterday I was jammin' I had some fancy ideas that I put together in this song , it's very progressive considering the time signature changes and maybe the Chords, too , but the structure is...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 01-06-2009, 02:21 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 356
Posted By Greymane
Before the Storm (Progressive Metal) [GP4,Gp5,MIDI] Finished

this is our latest work we play it with the band , it finished but there will be one more part after the drum solo , all kind of crit apreciated ,

c4c just leave me a link

Thanks in advance...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 12-16-2008, 01:33 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 557
Posted By Greymane
Ive added another few parts to the song , going...

Ive added another few parts to the song , going further it's gone wuite progressive in my eyes , all coment on the new part as well as on the old stuff are appreciate from bar 46 it's new
Forum: Tabs & Chords 12-15-2008, 11:14 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 662
Posted By Greymane
intro: very good idea , especially as you pick up...

intro: very good idea , especially as you pick up the riff again , but in reality i imagine this might sound much better with a lot of effect and very moody , flanger and phaser something like this ,...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 12-15-2008, 10:53 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 884
Posted By Greymane
this is very long so im' going to crit only...

this is very long so im' going to crit only peaces of it I especially think there's something to say , all in all very solid song , can't really find anything really proggy in there but nice...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 12-13-2008, 06:34 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 372
Posted By Greymane
hey there , i just listened to your song and read...

hey there , i just listened to your song and read the comments and wanted to add that i actually like , it looking a bit strange on the guitar pro with some addition of 7/8 and 9/8 , but it changes...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 12-13-2008, 06:26 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 557
Posted By Greymane
actually tbh i don't really like your intro that...

actually tbh i don't really like your intro that much , i didn't chose the piano because i liked it too sound epic or somewhat but because the guitar ends with nearly the similar riff in the song...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 12-04-2008, 05:05 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 557
Posted By Greymane
Kick In (unfinished) Prog Metal [gp5; gp4; midi]

some ideas for a song i recently had .. just tell me what you thi nk please , i don't really know if this is worth spending more time on in or not


edited file online
another edit
Forum: Tabs & Chords 11-06-2008, 06:50 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 262
Posted By Greymane
Fearless Nights (Metal Ballad) -Unfinished [Gp4; Gp5; Midi] C4C

that's a song our band started to work on a few month ago but then we just dropped it and started something new , a the moment we're like in a crisis and don't really know what to play so we've begun...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-17-2008, 09:19 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 320
Posted By Greymane
thats really good for second work , but to be...

thats really good for second work , but to be honest i can't really ahre the thought that this is going to somewhere, it sounds pretty nice until 21 in my opinion , from then it gets a bit inharmonic...
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