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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-27-2014, 03:47 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 387
Posted By circular.parade
the last line flows awkwardly to me, just a bit...

the last line flows awkwardly to me, just a bit wordy or something. I can appreciate the attempt, I still long for just a little more purpose despite the brevity.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-13-2014, 07:42 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 375
Posted By circular.parade
superb. Have I not known, I could have guessed...

superb. Have I not known, I could have guessed this piece was yours.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-09-2014, 07:55 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 347
Posted By circular.parade
the repetition works just fine for me, like it's...

the repetition works just fine for me, like it's allowed in this piece. That rhyme to open the stanza was the good stuff too. good to read you.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-29-2014, 04:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 343
Posted By circular.parade
oh man, you gotta be kidding me. This is a...

oh man, you gotta be kidding me. This is a special piece right here. I'm blown away by this. amazing.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-22-2014, 06:09 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 519
Posted By circular.parade
reading this was exactly like sitting on the...

reading this was exactly like sitting on the beach at high tide. this piece just took me away. I'd say the first 2 stanza appeared a little flat at first, but they made everything come together, they...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-22-2014, 07:58 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
yeah, turns out I can't write anymore. I miss...

yeah, turns out I can't write anymore. I miss reading all of you guys on a regular basis.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-13-2014, 05:05 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 559
Posted By circular.parade
best thing I've read from you in quite a while....

best thing I've read from you in quite a while. meaning this is quite good
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-26-2013, 12:20 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
not unnecessary at all man. quite a few people...

not unnecessary at all man. quite a few people dropped words like those recently, I guess we all feel the same way a little bit. when I'm rich I'm flying everybody and we'll meet and drink and read...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-24-2013, 12:40 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
if you're anything like me, you'll leave, find a...

if you're anything like me, you'll leave, find a great place, and wake up three years later thinking the exact same ;)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-21-2013, 10:45 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 426
Posted By circular.parade
yeah well every single line for me resonates so...

yeah well every single line for me resonates so much. except the ending couplet. I can still take this for what it is and enjoy the shit out of it and thank you for sharing. as far as the piece...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-18-2013, 10:14 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 426
Posted By circular.parade
this

this
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-18-2013, 07:51 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
you're drunk. or getting older

you're drunk.


or getting older
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-07-2013, 07:23 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 301
Posted By circular.parade
for me it's countenance too. it kind of clashes...

for me it's countenance too. it kind of clashes phonetically. maybe hint of it before the ending, a half-rhyme or just something that shares it's qualities.

I've been reading here again for a few...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2013, 06:02 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 182
Posted By circular.parade
very nice little piece of prose you have here....

very nice little piece of prose you have here. length was spot on I thought. I liked it.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2013, 02:32 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 551
Posted By circular.parade
sure, why not? nice little piece.

sure, why not? nice little piece.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2013, 02:30 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 301
Posted By circular.parade
ehhh I really liked this. the full circle seems...

ehhh I really liked this. the full circle seems like it could be just a little more effective, but definitely works as is. the last 3 lines not being in the same stanza kind of bothered me visually....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2013, 06:41 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 163
Posted By circular.parade
cheers

cheers
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-30-2013, 02:50 PM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
if only I'd written something for half the times...

if only I'd written something for half the times I got drunk since... i'll try and get to it today. how's the tour going jimmy
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-02-2013, 06:09 PM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
what magazine dylan? any chance to see what...

what magazine dylan? any chance to see what you've been doing, website?

jimmy, hope the tour's amazing. No YT date? oh well. will give you guys a listen, do sing/write?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-15-2013, 05:26 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 659
Posted By circular.parade
sigh. thanks for this. all the best, man.

sigh. thanks for this. all the best, man.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 10-15-2013, 03:33 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,097
Posted By circular.parade
yo, sure

yo, sure
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-09-2013, 12:56 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
hahaha that's almost 6 years ago man. crazy...

hahaha that's almost 6 years ago man. crazy stuff.

... I like to party.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2013, 06:01 PM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
you have no idea how this place helped me get an...

you have no idea how this place helped me get an actual grasp of the English language. I could argue that I learned more on here than all my classes combined, ESL to a couple semesters in an English...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-26-2013, 04:36 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 246
Posted By circular.parade
great execution as far as I'm concerned. yup.

great execution as far as I'm concerned. yup.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-17-2013, 02:09 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 306
Posted By circular.parade
It resonated over here man

It resonated over here man
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-15-2013, 01:39 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
it's really up to us/you guys to start using it...

it's really up to us/you guys to start using it more again. Why restrain the little content you get with a theme/directions?
The season is about to end up here in the Yukon and smartphone service is...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-19-2013, 08:20 PM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
yes.

yes.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-06-2013, 07:44 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 205
Posted By circular.parade
I actually enjoyed this a lot. a bit of a jump...

I actually enjoyed this a lot. a bit of a jump between lines 2 and 3. overall pretty solid
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-21-2013, 03:36 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
still in Dawson City, Yukon Territory. looks like...

still in Dawson City, Yukon Territory. looks like it's my new home, ah!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-21-2013, 02:24 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,055
Posted By circular.parade
cory, how have you been man? jimmy, I know it's...

cory, how have you been man? jimmy, I know it's been a while but did you make it to Alaska at all after all?
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