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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-28-2011, 11:55 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 138
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thanks for the suggestions. I will look into them...
thanks for the suggestions. I will look into them and I think they are very heolpful. It is quite frusturating at times writing actual lyrics as oppose to thriving in free verse, and reading this... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-27-2011, 05:25 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 587
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I really dig the style that is on display here....
I really dig the style that is on display here. kind of brash and you can feel the load of life that people probably felt in the past quite easily here. I honestly wouldn't mind seeing it continue on... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-27-2011, 03:09 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 138
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Lexington Harbor 1682
lyrics for a kind of long folk song. one of the favorites of mine, song wise. *** Leave the sails down when there is not a trade wind we left the shore at least two months ago. prepared the maps on... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-27-2011, 03:05 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 321
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yes, the mutitude of ideas were strangly well...
yes, the mutitude of ideas were strangly well sewn together, dare I say in an almost professional way...stanza two really strikes a chord, cause you start to realize if a guru's motivation is any... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-29-2011, 11:07 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 197
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It shows the frustration that I deal with that...
It shows the frustration that I deal with that most everyone seems to be living in a different reality than me. Not saying that my version is better or anything, just mine makes more sense to me but... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-29-2011, 03:33 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 197
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-28-2011, 02:37 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 197
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Dancing Under Lightning
Dancing Under Lightning *** Parted my hair and creased the clothes Shut the water off, and wipe my nose Everybody has a place to be Insulting to the point of make believe Ripping through the... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-28-2011, 02:34 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 304
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I don't know man, this for some reason didn't...
I don't know man, this for some reason didn't really do it for me. I guess the substance level was lacking, even though it might have been real personal. Sorry. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-06-2011, 06:49 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 222
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streetcarp19
Noisy Towns
lyrics for a folk song *** I kept the stone you wrapped in paper for me beside the plastic shroud Outraged that I had made a tape recording before we received the mail |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-06-2011, 06:46 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 200
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streetcarp19
this is an interesting topic, one which I am sure...
this is an interesting topic, one which I am sure hits home with everybody is the lovely superficial world we live in nowadays. Oh well, I guess not everyone is like that, just sayin. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-06-2011, 06:42 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 227
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well done my friend. I think it is good as is,...
well done my friend. I think it is good as is, probably doesn't anything else. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-16-2011, 01:43 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 104
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streetcarp19
Posies With No Ashes
another one of my songs to share... *** In the shallows of our anger limp across the grass lawn with no favors Negativity is the silence that flicks us in the face |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-01-2011, 10:25 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 121
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Wolfboy
An acoustic finger picking song in D minor *** There wasn't really any reason to leave but I packed it all up In a wad about the size of a tub Into the timber where the grasses had grown |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-21-2011, 01:21 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 228
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streetcarp19
thanks for the comments man. I will try and look...
thanks for the comments man. I will try and look for one of yours. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-17-2011, 02:23 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 228
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streetcarp19
Lasting Residue
*** Seen so much these last 5 years At least since I've woken up Looking back through the smoke screens When all feelings became sunk We weren't meant to know some things I guess dear Caught me up... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-02-2011, 02:05 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 117
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streetcarp19
Jumproom
*** Sneaking off the Jump-room to Mars Like it was planned all along have to find somewhere to sleep like we had worked on before Just because your dad was high up in one of those secret groups The... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-04-2010, 04:38 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 220
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-26-2010, 09:28 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 220
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streetcarp19
Womb (Promised Love)
one of my better folk songs ive written lately, at least i think. Thanks for any comments! *** We skip along on top of the roofs And feel the breeze in the holes of our masks I give away most... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-26-2010, 09:20 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 287
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streetcarp19
yes, this is a nice example of escapism, with the...
yes, this is a nice example of escapism, with the birds not singing, and that conflict, that at least always boils in me between sprawl and nature. Nice example of a meditative type of mind being... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-26-2010, 09:14 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 164
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streetcarp19
I like the mysteriousness of this, and that is...
I like the mysteriousness of this, and that is really all i can say. I leaves you with a cold feeling, but a good one. I guess that could be a result of it being OTS, but doesn't mean i like it any... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-18-2010, 06:24 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 155
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streetcarp19
hey, thanks. I will be posting some more lyrics...
hey, thanks. I will be posting some more lyrics to some of my recent songs, so keep an eye out. I am glad you liked it. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-17-2010, 03:16 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 330
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streetcarp19
I feel a pretty strong brain wash/conspiracy type...
I feel a pretty strong brain wash/conspiracy type vibe going on here, even though it might not be what you were going for. you tapped into a subject that could be taken pretty deep into the shallow... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-17-2010, 04:29 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 155
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streetcarp19
Metronome
Holy crap it has been forever since i last posted...oh well, this is an actual song not just poetry. enjoy! *** Passing time with a metronome Until I can see out the back of my dome Can't... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-31-2009, 10:08 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 188
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yeah, i had the urge to keep writing on this, but...
yeah, i had the urge to keep writing on this, but i figure i didn't know if i would stop very soon, so where i did seemed as good as any. thanks for the comments, and i did take a look at yours. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-31-2009, 02:47 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 376
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streetcarp19
I like the confusion you give the protaganist in...
I like the confusion you give the protaganist in this, from the various lines that you say one thing, and then in the next, turn around and say the opposite. Whether it was intentional or not, it... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-31-2009, 02:17 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 774
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what a read man...I will probably need a few more...
what a read man...I will probably need a few more run throughs to fully grasp the vastness here. there is just so much one could pay attention to here and absorb, and truely think about and relate to... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-31-2009, 05:33 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 224
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streetcarp19
yeah, you tied it up all pretty well, and an...
yeah, you tied it up all pretty well, and an interesting perspective on how one should handle torment in ones life. The subject here understands that repression probably isn;t the best way to deal... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-31-2009, 05:25 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 188
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streetcarp19
Leftover Fragments
*** In response to the complications you yourself have cursed I propose the linear analogy that silences even words. Meet upon a mountain top with the answers in your hand, cast a stone across the... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-31-2009, 05:05 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 464
Posted By
streetcarp19
I like how you were able to talk about nebulas...
I like how you were able to talk about nebulas and super models in the same stanza, and actually make it work. I guess it was just the contrasts of the two that really set it off, and must give you... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-28-2009, 03:15 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 193
Posted By
streetcarp19
yeah, i was going for simple and to the point,...
yeah, i was going for simple and to the point, but i know what you mean. |
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