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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-14-2005, 05:01 PM
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Replies: 844
Views: 14,219
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Efferri
selfless acts have consumed him
hating himself...
selfless acts have consumed him hating himself was part of the problem he acted for others to escape himself which ultimately left him limp |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-08-2005, 05:52 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 680
Posted By
Efferri
Very impressive. The flow is amazing. Mebbe...
Very impressive. The flow is amazing. Mebbe take out the word 'The' in the chorus. |
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Forum: Recordings
12-08-2005, 02:16 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,016
Posted By
Efferri
Mebbe its bad karma for being so insensistive...
Mebbe its bad karma for being so insensistive regarding the Late Pope John Paul (RIP) |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-07-2005, 02:10 PM
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Replies: 28
Views: 1,217
Posted By
Efferri
As a poem, I think this is really well written. ...As a poem, I think this is really well written. I like how you ventured out with the structure too. As a song, (in my opinion) I think it would be a little hard to follow. Unless you are the type... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-07-2005, 01:53 PM
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Replies: 646
Views: 15,598
Posted By
Efferri
I think WoTM to be an excellent motivation to...
I think WoTM to be an excellent motivation to keep writers writing. You only can get better through trial and error. Not only does it get them writing, but it gets them writing their BEST because... |
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