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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-14-2014, 02:30 AM
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Posted By Cobrevolution
thank you.

thank you.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-16-2013, 01:45 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 549
Posted By Cobrevolution
i am so ****ing grateful to be reading this right...

i am so ****ing grateful to be reading this right now, you have no idea

thank you so much
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-01-2013, 03:40 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 298
Posted By Cobrevolution
you are the only reason i still come around here.

you are the only reason i still come around here.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-12-2013, 03:48 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 403
Posted By Cobrevolution
thank you for your time

couple months old. haven't written, really, since around december or so. need to start editing stories and sending them out. and i miss posting here. all's well with me, though. any other ideas for a...
Forum: Musician Talk 04-26-2013, 01:11 PM
Replies: 17,259
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Posted By Cobrevolution
doing some analysis homework and i dunno what to...

doing some analysis homework and i dunno what to do with these two chords:

one is just E and G on the bass clef and G on the treble; i believe this particular section of the work moved to Dm, so i...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-25-2013, 08:05 PM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,460
Posted By Cobrevolution
anyone willing to look over my resume? i missed...

anyone willing to look over my resume? i missed deadlines for the MFA programs in nj and have to wait a year. which means, hello job market.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2013, 04:52 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 253
Posted By Cobrevolution
fall eyes

hey guys. i haven't written much because i've been happy. i'm with someone. i think, this semester, i'm really going to try and break out a couple polished, finished stories, and see where i can send...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-10-2013, 04:22 AM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,460
Posted By Cobrevolution
here's my problem with this kind of stuff. (and...

here's my problem with this kind of stuff. (and don't think i'm insensitive or ignorant
before i say this; i'm with a girl who was a victim of sexual assault, and if i could cripple the guy who did...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-07-2012, 05:48 PM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,460
Posted By Cobrevolution
thank you. it's about 150 pages give or take....

thank you. it's about 150 pages give or take. this program is really easy. i'm waiting for the cover art to get finished.

how long did it take to make/ship?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-02-2012, 11:47 PM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,460
Posted By Cobrevolution
so i've collected a couple of my stories and...

so i've collected a couple of my stories and poems and want to get them bound in a book for my mother for christmas. she's always hollering at me to give her something to read, so yeah.

i've been...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-30-2012, 06:10 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 405
Posted By Cobrevolution
i think the pronoun switch would make much more...

i think the pronoun switch would make much more sense than going into first person, since the last line sums up the rest of it and it wouldn't be misunderstood.

it's from mom and dad i'm sorry to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-30-2012, 05:55 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 405
Posted By Cobrevolution
i don't think the shift from third to first...

i don't think the shift from third to first person works. keep it narrative.

the first part of the monologue is, i think, great, and then it starts to fall a bit for me. i'd say cut or change that...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-27-2012, 01:01 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 213
Posted By Cobrevolution
plant kingdom

about a month old. i'm spending senior year drinking too much. it's snowing. this isn't supposed to make the utmost sense and i was conjuring images up after i had written it. it was a very strange...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-23-2012, 11:44 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 382
Posted By Cobrevolution
that's how i would edit this. i just thought...

that's how i would edit this.

i just thought the heart of it was buried. or at least concealed by other less important stuff. like that first stanza. all you need are eight words. the rest of that...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-17-2012, 04:38 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 789
Posted By Cobrevolution
months, for me.

months, for me.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-08-2012, 01:40 AM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,460
Posted By Cobrevolution
...

http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mbcoooAD5s1r34xauo1_500.gif

i haven't been so affected by an image in so long. this is positively heartrending to me right now.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-27-2012, 06:02 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 547
Posted By Cobrevolution
rose shaped glasses

i owe crits. i know this. but i'm continuing my tuesday-saturday drinking binge tonight and may or may not be coherent when i get back. also i want to play smash pretty badly as well as work on these...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-25-2012, 01:01 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 295
Posted By Cobrevolution
two things - first, change the you'd to you;...

two things - first, change the you'd to you; second, italicize every single instance of 'right' for consistency.

but yeah. this hit me.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-21-2012, 04:10 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 767
Posted By Cobrevolution
<3

<3
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-18-2012, 05:16 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 230
Posted By Cobrevolution
puppy dog therapy

if i kiss you where it's sore would you feel better? would you feel anything at all?

if i let my fingernails grow
i'd be able to claw my own flesh
but i'd scratch against the grain
and the blood...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-27-2012, 12:28 AM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,460
Posted By Cobrevolution
i'll be doing the 50-100 carbs a day thingy when...

i'll be doing the 50-100 carbs a day thingy when i move back to school in a week. hopefully that'll yield good results. how else am i going to prey on all the innocent freshmen *****s?



kidding.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2012, 01:27 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 273
Posted By Cobrevolution
thank you. i hate myself and need to drink more...

thank you. i hate myself and need to drink more to blur my thoughts.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2012, 11:51 PM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,460
Posted By Cobrevolution
i feel like i wrote this in one of my mini...

i feel like i wrote this in one of my mini prefaces a few months ago but here it is again just in case i didn't.

lidia yuknavitch's The Chronology of Water is probably one of the most incredible...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2012, 10:45 PM
Replies: 4
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Posted By Cobrevolution
^yeah, agreement here. the first stanza is pretty...

^yeah, agreement here. the first stanza is pretty damn good. it has a perfect ending (the stanza i mean, not the final two lines), nice and succinct, and i could probably uncoil a lot of different...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2012, 01:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 340
Posted By Cobrevolution
it's Rob. and i mean yeah the taste but i took...

it's Rob.

and i mean yeah the taste but i took it more as the memories being stuck there. i suppose 'it' is the correct one (it was very late in the night). i guess i'd say that if you didn't have...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2012, 02:31 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 340
Posted By Cobrevolution
i'm in agreement that there wasn't a smooth...

i'm in agreement that there wasn't a smooth transition of emotion. the first three or four lines are positive, glowing and glad, but then there's a sudden jump to masochism (or brooding or whatever)....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-14-2012, 04:05 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 273
Posted By Cobrevolution
the former

i wish i were violent.

beds are no longer erogenous zones
hormones take control fog our heads
make us want to ache and sore our bones instead
i no longer know what’s in store when anyone makes eye...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-07-2012, 02:03 AM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,460
Posted By Cobrevolution
^ Abattoir Blues/The Lyre of Orpheus is one of...

^ Abattoir Blues/The Lyre of Orpheus is one of the best things i've ever heard. tried to give the first album a try but meh, bad quality. The Fable of the Brown Ape is just..wooo
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-05-2012, 12:46 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 473
Posted By Cobrevolution
there are two words i feel you absolutely need to...

there are two words i feel you absolutely need to change - "fall" and "build". i know the balance thing works with fall but it can be so much better. the line with shade falls flat for me because i'm...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-02-2012, 08:30 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 318
Posted By Cobrevolution
thank you, guys. and yes that little error was...

thank you, guys. and yes that little error was intentional, blake. this joseph arthur guy isn't bad matt. might listen to more of him as the night wears on.
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