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Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-22-2012, 10:25 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 950
Posted By GU5T4V
Thank you all very much for the tips and pointing...

Thank you all very much for the tips and pointing out what doesn't work in this song. I will try to polish the joints as best as I can and rework the outro. I try to write music that DOESN'T come...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-20-2012, 10:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 331
Posted By GU5T4V
Halfway through, I was worried that it would...

Halfway through, I was worried that it would loose structure and seem like a heap of riffs thrown together for good measure. However, the excellent groove part returned and effectively unified the...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-18-2012, 01:14 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 512
Posted By GU5T4V
The odd time signatures come of as completely...

The odd time signatures come of as completely natural, and frankly, if I wasn't watching the tab pass by as I listened I wouldn't even notice it. So seamless, and soothing. This is exquisite, my...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-18-2012, 02:32 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 345
Posted By GU5T4V
Willing to help, especially if I can get your...

Willing to help, especially if I can get your creative juices flowing :haha:
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-17-2012, 11:10 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 938
Posted By GU5T4V
It's all in the drums, really. For the first...

It's all in the drums, really. For the first half, make the drums JUST follow the guitar pattern, and skip the straight eights on the bass drum. For the second half, do the exact same rhythm on the...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-16-2012, 07:06 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 950
Posted By GU5T4V
I agree on the transition between the bombastic...

I agree on the transition between the bombastic part of the intro and the dissonant black metal-esque riff that leads into the groove section - it is abrupt, and it is basically just about chock...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-16-2012, 06:17 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,063
Posted By GU5T4V
Yeah, I'll be Bach is a bit of a breather, but...

Yeah, I'll be Bach is a bit of a breather, but most of it is a "build up" leading into another onslaught. It is brilliantly put together, but it might be wise to extend that part a little bit so that...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-16-2012, 06:06 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,063
Posted By GU5T4V
Woah! Well, to say it's dramatic would be an...

Woah! Well, to say it's dramatic would be an understatement. If I were to pick out my favorite parts, it would Hapless Descent/I'll be Bach and Coming to Frutation, those parts are done absolutely...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-16-2012, 03:46 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 938
Posted By GU5T4V
159 is great, I knew the piano would shine with...

159 is great, I knew the piano would shine with some proper back up! 175 needs something more to make it more intense - I perceive this as a gradually intensifying section of the song, and with its...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-16-2012, 02:02 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 950
Posted By GU5T4V
I've listened to your advice and removed the...

I've listened to your advice and removed the second half of the calm opening. Alas, it actually turned out a lot less boring.

But I must frankly admit that I haven't got the slightest idea of what...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-16-2012, 01:46 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 345
Posted By GU5T4V
Hi. I've taken myself the liberty to add some...

Hi. I've taken myself the liberty to add some things to your track. You probably have a great vision of what this is supposed to sound like when recorded, but to me it just came across as some...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-15-2012, 04:47 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 470
Posted By GU5T4V
Pretty, unpretentious, and, partially, a lot of...

Pretty, unpretentious, and, partially, a lot of potential. I am a fan of the chorus and its wonderfully unpredictable chord progression, and the the fills in the interlude does their job to great...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-15-2012, 11:27 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,257
Posted By GU5T4V
This composition is an absolute mammoth as far as...

This composition is an absolute mammoth as far as I reckon. I can't say that the "flow" bothered me at all, everything sounded smooth and like a logical continuation on the part before it.

The...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-15-2012, 11:04 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 938
Posted By GU5T4V
Seems like you haven't received any actually...

Seems like you haven't received any actually criticism so far - don't worry, I'm here to change that.

Intro riff is well-crafted and unlike many similar riffs, actually given some care and love....
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-15-2012, 10:51 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 950
Posted By GU5T4V
"Never Comes", Progressive rock/metal [GP5, C4C]

It's been a long time since I last posted something at these forums (but back then I kinda compensated by posting ten songs at once (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1467949)),...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-10-2011, 10:25 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 941
Posted By GU5T4V
Sure, I'm looking forward to hearing how it might...

Sure, I'm looking forward to hearing how it might turn out.

And actually, I would love to hear a combo of classical piano and brutal death metal - ah well, guess I'm going to have to write it myself...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-10-2011, 07:43 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 941
Posted By GU5T4V
Okay, I'm listening to the MP3, which means that...

Okay, I'm listening to the MP3, which means that it will be hard for me to give any tips regarding composition, and so forth, since well, I can't see how its composed :haha:

Regarding the piece at...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-10-2011, 07:29 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,097
Posted By GU5T4V
Mate, you just won the best person on earth...

Mate, you just won the best person on earth award. Here, have a virtual pint :cheers:

I'm going to try my best to find some people who share my musical ambition/vision and record the shit out of...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-09-2011, 04:03 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 676
Posted By GU5T4V
For a start, this is good. The chord progression...

For a start, this is good. The chord progression is generic, but with enough variation to it to prevent it from getting boring. The variations are also skillfully implemented, so the song progresses...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-08-2011, 09:21 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 256
Posted By GU5T4V
The intro is okay - fairly generic progression,...

The intro is okay - fairly generic progression, but hell, this kind of power/melodeath wouldn't be what it is without it. So part one should be kept as it is. Part two is pretty much just some...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-07-2011, 09:07 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,867
Posted By GU5T4V
Good job. Music like this is hard to compose but...

Good job. Music like this is hard to compose but you managed to pull it off.

Regarding the intro (and the similar outro), to me it sounds quite structureless without any proper phrasing and such....
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-07-2011, 08:45 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,097
Posted By GU5T4V
The sudden transitions in The Drowning are mostly...

The sudden transitions in The Drowning are mostly intentional - it is supposed to have "stop-start" dynamics. But I guess GuitarPro is not really the best way to convey them.

Ah well, guess I'll...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-07-2011, 06:29 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,071
Posted By GU5T4V
Okay, so my first impression was actually quite...

Okay, so my first impression was actually quite positive. The problem with the song is the lack of dynamics, mostly because of the repetitive chord progression that rarely strays from the same three...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-07-2011, 06:06 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,097
Posted By GU5T4V
Thank you for the nice, developing comments. I...

Thank you for the nice, developing comments. I shall consider the ideas regarding the second half of the 7/4 breakdown in "The Cascade", sounds like it could turn out really cool. Going to rewrite it...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-07-2011, 01:53 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 624
Posted By GU5T4V
Keep the bend for crisps sake! The accidental...

Keep the bend for crisps sake! The accidental that it bends up from gives the otherwise quite generic melody some needed personality - as I said, just make it get to the B a tad bit faster, as I...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-07-2011, 06:43 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 639
Posted By GU5T4V
I loved it - would probably work even greater...

I loved it - would probably work even greater with a proper vocal delivery. Also, some synth strings wouldn't hurt, really. Strings could probably make the different parts stand out more from each...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-07-2011, 06:34 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 295
Posted By GU5T4V
Why haven't you put the entire thing up? I've...

Why haven't you put the entire thing up? I've listened to a couple of the snippets and I can definitely say that I would like to see the entire songs - you've obviously put a lot of work into this....
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-05-2011, 08:57 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 346
Posted By GU5T4V
There is no denying your prowess in making...

There is no denying your prowess in making effective, catchy metalcore riffs. But as stated earlier, this could very well be a Trivium song or whatever - it simply doesn't stand out when compared to...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-05-2011, 06:58 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,097
Posted By GU5T4V
I am aware of the somewhat bland drumming,...

I am aware of the somewhat bland drumming, consider them placeholders (writing "alive" drum tracks in GP is tedious as hell...). And do you care to elaborate? Just a tiny bit?
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-05-2011, 06:06 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,152
Posted By GU5T4V
Reminds me of Opeth, which is a VERY good thing...

Reminds me of Opeth, which is a VERY good thing :)

The intro sets a wonderful vibe, but you somewhat abuse the "tremolo riff, end with sudden chord, STOP, tremolo riff, etc"-formula - the riffs are...
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