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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-05-2012, 02:59 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 633
Posted By Svetlova
157 views and not a single reply? I thought this...

157 views and not a single reply?

I thought this was really good. :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-26-2012, 11:35 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 752
Posted By Svetlova
Shush you, you'll ruin your reputation of being...

Shush you, you'll ruin your reputation of being the soulless critic and ego-smasher.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-24-2012, 10:47 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 225
Posted By Svetlova
I'm gonna crit this later tonight, seems...

I'm gonna crit this later tonight, seems promising on my first quick read-through though.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-24-2012, 10:43 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 752
Posted By Svetlova
Thanks everyone, the support means a lot as I've...

Thanks everyone, the support means a lot as I've been trying to write a decent poem for about the past six months and it's been pretty frustrating. hopefully this spells the end of my writer's block...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-21-2012, 09:33 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 752
Posted By Svetlova
Grammar tightened up a bit. thanks.

Grammar tightened up a bit.

thanks.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-20-2012, 10:11 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 752
Posted By Svetlova
WotW : Weird Bodies

In some Morning sickness he, slouching
over the toilet in frail and trembling surreal conception,
catches spittle and bile in his beard.

I could have carried it with a certain grace, I'm...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-20-2012, 10:10 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 783
Posted By Svetlova
I'd really like to see someone try and derive...

I'd really like to see someone try and derive meaning from this.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-08-2012, 11:44 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,070
Posted By Svetlova
thanks Dylan and jimi, and yes, it's Lisa. :D

thanks Dylan and jimi, and yes, it's Lisa. :D
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-03-2012, 08:15 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 853
Posted By Svetlova
Wait a second here-- I'm going to actually read...

Wait a second here-- I'm going to actually read this poem.

Let's take a moment to read this poem aloud.

listen to the wealth of consonance and dissonance within the word play. it's quite beautiful...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-03-2012, 01:28 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 853
Posted By Svetlova
It's free association. You're not supposed to...

It's free association. You're not supposed to care about what it means. I'm guessing it's simply an experiment in form.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-02-2012, 11:42 PM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,070
Posted By Svetlova
So I just landed a job as a bartender somehow,...

So I just landed a job as a bartender somehow, even though I've no experience whatsoever. I can't wait for belligerent shenanigans to ensue.

hopefully it will inspire some writing, as I very much...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2012, 01:16 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 789
Posted By Svetlova
congrats Fred! it's about time! :)

congrats Fred! it's about time! :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-16-2012, 01:28 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,070
Posted By Svetlova
it works for Disney, it worked for Murakami,...

it works for Disney, it worked for Murakami, it'll work for you! :D

my next goal is to make you add a fairy princess.

haha jimi, you're not that far off. they're mice.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-10-2012, 01:52 PM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,070
Posted By Svetlova
Hey guys, so I know a lot of you have Tumblr...

Hey guys, so I know a lot of you have Tumblr accounts for your poetry and what not.

I recently re-read their content policy and, for those of you that post writing, poetry and lyrics on Tumblr,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-21-2012, 08:27 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 309
Posted By Svetlova
I agree. as to what Randy said, yes it's true...

I agree.

as to what Randy said, yes it's true you can sometimes fairly obtuse in your wording, but I think even just the diction lends itself quite well to emotion and mood and even if you can't...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2012, 09:34 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 477
Posted By Svetlova
thanks Randy, you actually were very helpful, and...

thanks Randy, you actually were very helpful, and actually brought up a legitimate point in that I think changing the title might actually clarify the content of this poem a bit more. I might have...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2012, 09:31 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 12,179
Posted By Svetlova
I think the introduction was the strongest part...

I think the introduction was the strongest part of the piece, so visceral and violent I could really picture this gruesome image.

"The fourth bird burst forth" is a bit of a tongue-twister, it's an...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2012, 09:21 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 477
Posted By Svetlova
I've changed the title to Lust in order to end...

I've changed the title to Lust in order to end this discussion on how I don't know French. I liked the euphemism, but my misspelling has obviously prevented anyone from being able to actually read...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2012, 06:23 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 477
Posted By Svetlova
I think if you'd looked up the meaning of the...

I think if you'd looked up the meaning of the title, you'd get the punch at the end. and also the set-up.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 09:57 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 477
Posted By Svetlova
thanks for the critique.

thanks for the critique.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 07:43 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 477
Posted By Svetlova
Wikipedia begs to differ.

Wikipedia begs to differ.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 03:47 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 353
Posted By Svetlova
change "boss" to "hoss" and...

change "boss" to "hoss" and you get an A+



but in all honesty, I mostly agree with Zack, a bit forgettable.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 03:41 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 274
Posted By Svetlova
"heavily adorned ears" seems a bit over...

"heavily adorned ears" seems a bit over the top in terms of describing that she simply wore earrings. sometimes simplicity is the most appropriate. the second stanza/verse, I think might benefit from...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 03:36 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 12,179
Posted By Svetlova
tl;dr juuuust kidding, I'm already intrigued by...

tl;dr

juuuust kidding, I'm already intrigued by the title and the first stanza (what a great opening!), but I will have to save this crit for when I'm more awake.

I WILL get back to it though.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2012, 03:25 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 477
Posted By Svetlova
lust

Lust

shifting liquidly between the calcium reefs,
I swam, through floral patterns of surrounding fabric;
claustrophobia bent on dissuading me from the realism,
and gravity of the attempt to place...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-24-2011, 03:14 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 206
Posted By Svetlova
apparently I leave for a week and our apartment...

apparently I leave for a week and our apartment just turns into festering miserableness and you set your laundry on fire. I hope our cats are still alive and you haven't turned their rotting skulls...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2011, 12:42 PM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,070
Posted By Svetlova
I've had Lolita sitting on my shelf for about a...

I've had Lolita sitting on my shelf for about a year and haven't gotten around to it yet. I have to stick with Dosty though, I've read a book or story by him every winter for the past 3...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-13-2011, 10:57 PM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,070
Posted By Svetlova
it's my last undergrad break as well. I'm going...

it's my last undergrad break as well. I'm going to stretch 5 giant canvases, paint like mad and read some Russian literature because it's my wintertime tradition. Finally going to tackle The...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-11-2011, 08:02 PM
Replies: 70
Views: 9,542
Posted By Svetlova
This song holds possibly some of my favorite...

This song holds possibly some of my favorite lyrics ever written:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JxIPPU-EOF0



The Books are so perfect for wintertime.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-11-2011, 04:59 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 171
Posted By Svetlova
I applaud you for being able to create a piece of...

I applaud you for being able to create a piece of writing out of what most would assume to be a job that kills creativity. The capability of deriving something meaningful from every experience is...
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