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Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-04-2010, 05:44 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,508
Posted By grooaarrhh
Hi there, So I've listened quickly to this folder...

Hi there,
So I've listened quickly to this folder and I conclude this:

- Musically, there are no real problems: everything is well written, etc..
- The originality goes along with complexity. Good...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-02-2010, 12:59 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 708
Posted By grooaarrhh
Let's crit this one! The beginning is good but...

Let's crit this one!

The beginning is good but you can improve a lots drums part. Here it's the weakest point.

At bar 25, it doesnt' flow that well. It's either the rhytm of the riff, its...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-28-2010, 03:24 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 717
Posted By grooaarrhh
Sorry for this bump but I'm really curious about...

Sorry for this bump but I'm really curious about what you think of the new version.
Still C4C!
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-22-2010, 09:41 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 604
Posted By grooaarrhh
Something I don't understand in your song is that...

Something I don't understand in your song is that you begin with a catchy lead, use it here and there, but never develop it! Why not ? For me it's only somekind of weak transitions.
Here you can...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-22-2010, 09:28 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 568
Posted By grooaarrhh
Alright, some more remarks: - I'm definitely not...

Alright, some more remarks:
- I'm definitely not that good writing drums stuff but I don't know how to make them more "there". It's not that much a problem because I'm a guitar player.

- Then about...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-21-2010, 05:28 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 3,791
Posted By grooaarrhh
OMG! This is awesome, you really made a huge song...

OMG! This is awesome, you really made a huge song there. I will crit this later (like in a week) but I'm just saying that there are fantastic parts ("I am colossus" especially). The only negative...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-20-2010, 01:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 460
Posted By grooaarrhh
The song made me think of some Russian Circle...

The song made me think of some Russian Circle stuff.
The first big part (1-110) is well built. Nothing really to crit. Just add some vocals here and there because there's not much going on (which...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-20-2010, 12:24 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 568
Posted By grooaarrhh
Thy for crit. I keep them in my mind clearly and...

Thy for crit. I keep them in my mind clearly and I will do some change when I have ideas for them.

Remarks:
- Sometimes this song could sound emppty. It's because it lacks vocals. I will write them...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-19-2010, 11:57 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,647
Posted By grooaarrhh
Totally agree with what has been said before...

Totally agree with what has been said before me.
I think you should use more slides/bends rather than this constant stream of notes which get boring after a while.

Sorry to say it also: your...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-19-2010, 11:45 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 850
Posted By grooaarrhh
Wow that's awesome. I really like it most of the...

Wow that's awesome. I really like it most of the time. You succeed in creating chaotic/ melodic atmosphere. But as it Gakbez said, sometimes it's really really messy (bars29-31; then 49-57).
Try to...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-19-2010, 11:33 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 568
Posted By grooaarrhh
Feeling superfluous [someway BTBAM influenced] C4C

HI again,
once more I request your crit for this song, which seems similar to "Ad a Dglgmut" from BTBAM.

I tried my best to create original riffs and to improve transitions. Hope I succeed in doing...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-12-2010, 01:42 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,499
Posted By grooaarrhh
You made a continuation to Abiogenesis, which...

You made a continuation to Abiogenesis, which ismy favorite song on UG! Thanks you!
But I'll try to give a summary of what I felt while listening to it.

The crit:
This song is really good but it has...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-12-2010, 01:05 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 466
Posted By grooaarrhh
Add lyrics and it will be one of the greatest...

Add lyrics and it will be one of the greatest easy-listening/creative/fresh song I've ever listened to.

Amazing work.
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-09-2010, 06:16 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 879
Posted By grooaarrhh
You have some really strong parts here with a...

You have some really strong parts here with a strong emotion.
Hope you'll put some lyrics, it will give the song an other dimension. For the moment it still feels a bit monotonous.

Breakdown I is...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-08-2010, 05:26 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 857
Posted By grooaarrhh
Hi so til bars 31 nothing to crit. Good technical...

Hi
so til bars 31 nothing to crit. Good technical death metal.
Then I don't like the harmonies bars 32-33. If I were you, would change the second guitar here.
Then the transition sounds VERY odd....
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-08-2010, 05:17 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 381
Posted By grooaarrhh
It's very rhythmed. You did a really good job for...

It's very rhythmed. You did a really good job for the drums.
The guitar solo is good, even really good if it's the first one.

The only crit is the Breakdown part. I don't like it at all. The...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-07-2010, 05:40 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,429
Posted By grooaarrhh
WHAT? Give me some links to hear what you have...

WHAT?
Give me some links to hear what you have done since! QUICK!

Just kidding :D , but I'm looking forward to listen to some of your new stuff.
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-07-2010, 05:35 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 329
Posted By grooaarrhh
Shiver [Short guitar piece]

Hi again,
Before I send more complex songs, I'll just ask you this two questions:

- Did it was pleasant to hear even if it's really short?
- Did the name suits the mood of the song well?

It's C4C...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-07-2010, 05:25 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 896
Posted By grooaarrhh
I'm not much into that style but I try to...

I'm not much into that style but I try to understand what's going on in the most brutal/technical today's genre. To answer your two questions:

- The rhytm of the riffs are good but I don't like your...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-07-2010, 01:21 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 896
Posted By grooaarrhh
So grindcore. Ok let's do it. But I don't know...

So grindcore. Ok let's do it.
But I don't know how to crit this. I didn't enjoy most of the riff in the first half. Why? Because they lack originality (ok that's not a good argument for brutal...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-07-2010, 01:05 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,429
Posted By grooaarrhh
Haven't read the whole thread... sorry but I...

Haven't read the whole thread... sorry but I listened to the updated tabs.

Some parts will have benefits from lyrics. Only an instrumental song could be a little... indigestible. But I read the...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-07-2010, 12:42 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,767
Posted By grooaarrhh
Good beginning. Creates a tight atmosphere. Then...

Good beginning. Creates a tight atmosphere.
Then the transition is a bit forced. But don't worry it flows.

Verse 1 is ok.
Then, when bar 23 kicks in, I hear some harmonies that I don't like. Maybe...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-07-2010, 12:07 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 717
Posted By grooaarrhh
Thanks everyone for those crits. So what I will...

Thanks everyone for those crits. So what I will remeber and rework are:

- first the drums, who seems inappropriate : not bad, but could be a lot better. It will be hard as I'm only a guitar player....
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-05-2010, 06:17 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 717
Posted By grooaarrhh
Hey thanks for your quick answer! Yeah. You're...

Hey thanks for your quick answer!


Yeah. You're right but here I wanted to do something very frontal (in fact, I find the main riff a bit stupid :haha: ). But it's true that this one lack things...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-05-2010, 05:54 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 304
Posted By grooaarrhh
Nice feeling through the whole song. A bit...

Nice feeling through the whole song. A bit sad/depressed but with a somewhat hidden smile.
I like it mostly but there are some things a have to tell you:
you made a choice: put all the brush...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-05-2010, 05:27 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 537
Posted By grooaarrhh
Okay let's crit this one. You begin with a...

Okay let's crit this one.
You begin with a breakdown, why not? BUT you have to change bar5 (and maybe bar 4) because they completely destroy the groove of the 2 first measures. HEre you have to make...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-05-2010, 05:00 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,308
Posted By grooaarrhh
In fact, it's just guitar pro's MIDI pull-off. So...

In fact, it's just guitar pro's MIDI pull-off. So I take back what I said.

And can you crit this one? Thx
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=24605585#post24605585
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-05-2010, 07:01 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 409
Posted By grooaarrhh
Ok, so that's my crit The beginning is just...

Ok, so that's my crit
The beginning is just scary. You did a really original use of bird tweet.
Then the build-up. It's very tight, nearly dissonant. Sounds a bit like Neurosis and stuff.
There are...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-05-2010, 06:31 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 551
Posted By grooaarrhh
I listen to what you wrote and this is not bad at...

I listen to what you wrote and this is not bad at all. I just find it a bit empty. You can try to add some chords in there (but use them wisely, not on the entire song for example). Even with simple...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 07-04-2010, 06:07 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 822
Posted By grooaarrhh
Just to say twothings : - The end is wonderful....

Just to say twothings :
- The end is wonderful. You can be proud of this! (check Shining's "Black Jazz" and Zu's "Carboniferous" for somme great Saxophone)
- Be careful of the too-much effect. as a...
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