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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-21-2015, 06:35 AM
Replies: 2,215
Views: 88,035
Posted By Bleed Away
S&L made everyone a better writer, including...

S&L made everyone a better writer, including me.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-04-2015, 09:16 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 313
Posted By Bleed Away
Electrotherapy

Electrotherapy for the neoliberal;
the return of age. The friends
come in counterfeits, now I am
the proverbial orbiter
surrounded by this dungeon
known as a brothel. Sex doesn’t
change you:...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-23-2015, 06:14 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 305
Posted By Bleed Away
I don't like the first stanza... But everything...

I don't like the first stanza... But everything after that is ****ing great!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-23-2015, 05:50 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 376
Posted By Bleed Away
Derude - Sandstorm, at the funeral

Randomness remains our platform for the divine comedy
that resembles us. Our weaknesses will continue to grow tall
before taking a final turn towards some fugitive revelation.
I want to die. I want...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-15-2015, 01:43 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 530
Posted By Bleed Away
This made me laugh in a good way.

This made me laugh in a good way.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-13-2015, 07:14 AM
Replies: 2,215
Views: 88,035
Posted By Bleed Away
I hope you're okay, man! My sister has been...

I hope you're okay, man! My sister has been suffering from that for a few years, so I can emphasise.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-02-2015, 09:43 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 369
Posted By Bleed Away
As always, I completely agree with what you're...

As always, I completely agree with what you're saying. Thanks for reading!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-26-2015, 01:52 PM
Replies: 2,215
Views: 88,035
Posted By Bleed Away
Great to read this! It's hard to believe that a...

Great to read this! It's hard to believe that a site dedicated to guitars can do this. I am glad that things are getting better for you!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-26-2015, 01:51 PM
Replies: 2,215
Views: 88,035
Posted By Bleed Away
I really hope this place never dies. Even though...

I really hope this place never dies. Even though the layout of this website has been exactly the same since 2002, I want it to remain this way.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-24-2015, 11:23 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,857
Posted By Bleed Away
There's nothing that I can add to this. You...

There's nothing that I can add to this. You managed to describe the feeling of longing and lust so intricately yet living a bit of room for the reader to interprete the nuances that surround it....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-23-2015, 09:37 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 369
Posted By Bleed Away
Fractals and others

I thought I had written all that I had to say... But then this hit me, out of nowhere. I am...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-21-2015, 11:43 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 362
Posted By Bleed Away
"I will always hate myself" (my last poem for a while)

I don’t want to hurt anyone, I just want to die
and tip the scales, like some kind of minor miracle; I am
a fool, I go outside too often, only to find myself
greeting the ground - Baba purge would be...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-16-2015, 08:58 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 312
Posted By Bleed Away
Chasing for something that doesn’t belong to you

Chasing for something that never belonged to me,
my mother taught me better than that; I once cared
about women, around the same time that I wished
I was a better person. Now I am unapologetic
for my...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-14-2015, 05:27 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 251
Posted By Bleed Away
Too f*cking different

This is my city, uncultivated since the lost era
of defying Satan. I am inanimate. I will live my final days
alone. I have written these words (somewhere) before. I am caught in
a sensation, not felt...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2015, 06:24 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 316
Posted By Bleed Away
4AM in London

No one knows me. At all.
I first came here when I was only 6
with my mum, back when a sense of family still existed
back when I wanted to live in America, instead.
I was the successor of something...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2015, 10:11 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 386
Posted By Bleed Away
Get some help, bruh

Our smiles are reminiscent
of the beheaded, unsuspecting
but frantic. Who will survive the approaching
last days? Society with eyes like dartboards -
only carcasses found, “that is us
right now”...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2015, 09:23 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 586
Posted By Bleed Away
I would change "hangs" to...

I would change "hangs" to "hang". But, apart from that, I really liked this; you did very well with the line-breaks!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2015, 09:15 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 470
Posted By Bleed Away
This is, by far, the best I have read from you....

This is, by far, the best I have read from you. Keep it up.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-21-2015, 07:46 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 419
Posted By Bleed Away
Stochastic

Here are the tribal drums/hear
the tribal drums - they are
falling apart. Now dance
with the flesh, until you have
nothing left
to be ashamed of.

We are among the sands.
We are one with our...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-17-2015, 11:14 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 207
Posted By Bleed Away
Disconnectivity

The doing of God’s work:
Don’t let the world turn your stone
into manna, as if such an origin
was never after your life [since the beginning]. I know
that pain.

You were born an orphan;
a miracle...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-16-2015, 01:37 PM
Replies: 2,215
Views: 88,035
Posted By Bleed Away
yo. where you doing your grad?

yo. where you doing your grad?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-15-2015, 03:12 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,034
Posted By Bleed Away
Thanks for this, btw - I really appreciate it! I...

Thanks for this, btw - I really appreciate it! I showed it to a few people and none of them got anyrthing from it, despite it being very relevant to what is going on today.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-14-2015, 07:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 488
Posted By Bleed Away
Absolutely no offense was taken. This is no...

Absolutely no offense was taken. This is no longer a sensitive subject for me (thanks to the therapy). I wanted this to have a different aesthetics to that of "Northern Atheist"; I didn't want things...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-09-2015, 03:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 488
Posted By Bleed Away
Dear Susan

I apologise via autobiography
with my essence suppressed;
I loved you more than a man should dare.
This was the end of the road for me;
I had lost myself
therein concatenation,
humans called it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:34 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 281
Posted By Bleed Away
The third stanza was particularly...

The third stanza was particularly thought-provoking.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:31 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 380
Posted By Bleed Away
I enjoyed this, especially the imagery in the...

I enjoyed this, especially the imagery in the first stanza! The only thing that distracted me while reading this was the lack of punctuation; the first stanza had none at all, while the second had...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:22 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 268
Posted By Bleed Away
I think this poem was constructed perfectly....

I think this poem was constructed perfectly. Instead of the format taking presidence over the meaning behind the poem, it complimented it very well. The line breaks were very calculated.

The only...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 05:45 AM
Replies: 2,215
Views: 88,035
Posted By Bleed Away
After being on this site for over 9 years, I have...

After being on this site for over 9 years, I have decided to invest on a guitar (acoustic and electric). Writing poetry for so long and listening to a copious amount of music over the years will...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2015, 08:02 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 349
Posted By Bleed Away
This is you at your best.

This is you at your best.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2015, 07:47 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 314
Posted By Bleed Away
Otto Rocket

Standing at the crossroads, impervious
to the soul that never existed
to begin with. I transformed
into the holy until I become one
with the ruin of not giving a damn
about mortality.
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