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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-03-2013, 02:18 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 124
Posted By abhishek21
Events and Cycles

Events and cycles

Rolled down windows canít calm me down.
Iíve been in this place for quite a while.
Every new turn and path I discover brings me
back here in this same situation.
I asked for help I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2013, 06:46 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 590
Posted By abhishek21
your rhyme scheme is off and the flow sucks...

your rhyme scheme is off and the flow sucks pretty bad apart from that idea is good it lacks metaphor and imagery
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2013, 06:44 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 320
Posted By abhishek21
If you are going for a title called spam mail and...

If you are going for a title called spam mail and you don't have a story to tell even if its in form of nigerian price or retired colonel of US army I don't give a shit about it


I've raed this...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2013, 06:41 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 216
Posted By abhishek21
This is one hell of a vague imagery.The problem...

This is one hell of a vague imagery.The problem with this piece is that you are trying to tell a story which is full of personal bond and expectations but nowhere in the piece I can come across the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2013, 06:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 212
Posted By abhishek21
IF even I put this to the most metal riff, This...

IF even I put this to the most metal riff, This song will suck. You know why because it doesn't have the flow there is no repetitive pattern it.

this might be the greatest metal song you ever wrote...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2013, 06:31 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 218
Posted By abhishek21
Thanks for the critique guys. This is about a...

Thanks for the critique guys.

This is about a guy who lost his Significant other who goes back to her grave and wonders about stuff


Yes this is Andy
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2013, 06:14 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 124
Posted By abhishek21
Starlight fever

Starlight fever

After a touching farewell to self belief in cloudy days
To track your existence through stars.
You donít need horoscope analysis to catalyze your
astrological breakdown.

Until the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2013, 06:11 AM
Replies: 1,892
Views: 60,888
Posted By abhishek21
I don't know if you guys remember me but what the...

I don't know if you guys remember me but what the hell is going on in here. There are spams and bullshit going on
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-22-2013, 03:08 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 218
Posted By abhishek21
Stay

Stay

Last time I was here. I had just met heartache.
The spot was there I just had to wait to park it.
Someday somewhere, sitting alone eventually.
I will come across a rhyme that will fill this...
Forum: Guitar Techniques 05-14-2012, 02:18 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 393
Posted By abhishek21
Guitar exercises book

Hi

I am looking to buy a guitar exercise book . Can anyone point me to a good book?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-15-2010, 09:12 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 272
Posted By abhishek21
Why sammy smokes weed?

ďWhen I smoke weed, A note of music plays in my head. It can be any of the instruments. Then after few more shots, another instruments join it. As I keep on smoking, lots of instruments keep joining...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-20-2010, 07:10 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 196
Posted By abhishek21
Quick reaction

Quick reaction

Blue skies, smell of the ocean and drifting winds.
Crossing your face makes the whole thing surreal.
We all can push a button and trap the emotion,
Frame it in a cage and stare at it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-20-2010, 07:02 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 162
Posted By abhishek21
Although the story element in this piece was...

Although the story element in this piece was short, The way it was written was quite engaging and there was a little bit of sadness in it. Writing wise it was sweet and thought provoking but as a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-20-2010, 06:50 PM
Replies: 2,713
Views: 52,456
Posted By abhishek21
Let's talk about depression for a second, you...

Let's talk about depression for a second, you people are saying comment like "I want to die at 20" and shit.

If i recap my life for the last three years, let's see I was about to get married to the...
Forum: The Pit 08-11-2010, 07:23 PM
Replies: 1,532
Views: 29,742
Posted By abhishek21
I have droid. It's a good phone

I have droid. It's a good phone
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-26-2010, 07:26 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 432
Posted By abhishek21
I thought it was cute and entertaining....

I thought it was cute and entertaining. Throughout the piece carried a touch of innocence.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2010, 06:38 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 410
Posted By abhishek21
This is what Google translator thinks of your...

This is what Google translator thinks of your piece Matt. I think that's your name?

I will be forever carved in the time
fixed, complete successfully. hung,
fingertips,
his angel hair, kneaded her...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2010, 12:52 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 207
Posted By abhishek21
Fix the typo "Heavan " I think the...

Fix the typo "Heavan "


I think the song flowed pretty well and can be a good song musically if done right but from lyrical point of view it was nothing new.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2010, 12:49 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 333
Posted By abhishek21
Why did you report him? You can post anything...

Why did you report him?

You can post anything related to creative writing in this forum if I remember correctly.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2010, 12:44 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 333
Posted By abhishek21
I read this whole thing just because I thought...

I read this whole thing just because I thought title was interesting. I'm gonna be quite honest with you. The whole thing got pretty boring and it took quite an effort to finish. In midway I was...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2010, 12:32 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 273
Posted By abhishek21
Let's see the overall vibe was good. The flow...

Let's see the overall vibe was good. The flow gets disturbed when you get carried away wit words like when you shift from

I am the bullet-
defending only
the blind movements
of my...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2010, 12:23 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 225
Posted By abhishek21
This used to be my drug Now it's nothing but soft...

This used to be my drug
Now it's nothing but soft water

Change this line and add something abstract or vague to it. So that it appears more generic and open to interpretation of some personal kind...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-17-2010, 07:21 PM
Replies: 1,574
Views: 83,278
Posted By abhishek21
What happened to the community thread? Without...

What happened to the community thread? Without that thread this forum looks like a notice board of some rehab center.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-06-2009, 07:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 169
Posted By abhishek21
Well second verse was much better than the first...

Well second verse was much better than the first one. It rhymed very well. I think for a parody type of song this was very neat. Those lines look so innocent but are awesome in sense to whole piece....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-06-2009, 07:15 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 257
Posted By abhishek21
The best part "don't you think it's...

The best part




"don't you think it's art?"
I felt like some sarcasm was missing
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-06-2009, 06:52 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 156
Posted By abhishek21
It started out at a very immature level. Than it...

It started out at a very immature level. Than it proceeded to become a string just trying to hold on to the different ideas. At level three it picked up and sounded more intellectual and than the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-06-2009, 06:45 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 184
Posted By abhishek21
Apart from the whole necrophilia business and the...

Apart from the whole necrophilia business and the whole dark romance thing I think you had a cool idea. The main problem with your piece was too much effort to paint a particular picture inside my...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-11-2009, 09:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 205
Posted By abhishek21
I think he/she wants something in there and would...

I think he/she wants something in there and would really appreciate some ideas or suggestions.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-11-2009, 09:02 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 294
Posted By abhishek21
I think it was one of the best things i ever read...

I think it was one of the best things i ever read here. It didn't had cheesy stuff and the flow was awesome. You are always good with flow. Awesome job :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-11-2009, 08:59 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 205
Posted By abhishek21
I think it flowed pretty well . I mean rhyme was...

I think it flowed pretty well . I mean rhyme was really tight but I feel like just for the sake of rhyme you might have hold things back but that can be me also.

I thought the change of scenes was...
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