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Forum: Original Recordings 05-28-2015, 08:00 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 180
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, The song sounds nice and pleasant, and...

Hey man,

The song sounds nice and pleasant, and vocals are mostly in tune, which is good. Would sound really cool if it was recorded guitar and vocals seperately, I think, but thats just me.

Keep...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-28-2015, 07:48 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 119
Posted By TommyGunUk
Yo dude, The general atmosphere (heh) of the...

Yo dude,

The general atmosphere (heh) of the song is pretty cool. Its very quirky, I like it. I dunno if I entirely agree with the concept of quieter solos and guitar to make it sound more...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-28-2015, 07:38 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 124
Posted By TommyGunUk
Cool shit! I like the synth stuff in the...

Cool shit! I like the synth stuff in the background especially, they sound really futuristic. And the soloing is of course really good, goes without saying.
Forum: Original Recordings 05-28-2015, 07:34 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 166
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hi, The instrumental is produced very well, so...

Hi,
The instrumental is produced very well, so well done on that part.
It sounds very classic rock, but it pulls it off very well so well done there as well.

My main critique is that it seems like...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-23-2015, 05:52 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 162
Posted By TommyGunUk
Second song is quite pleasant and thought...

Second song is quite pleasant and thought provoking, has some nice things going for it. As the last guy said, sounds quite proggy/fusion-y, which in my opinion is quite a good thing. It needs vocals,...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-23-2015, 05:42 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 207
Posted By TommyGunUk
Pretty cool soloing, one thing that I might say...

Pretty cool soloing, one thing that I might say is for improv try and explore more of the fretboard. You do branch out a little, but the majority of it you play in the same sort of 4/5 fret span of...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-23-2015, 03:58 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 234
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, thanks for your review! I reckon the...

Hey man, thanks for your review!

I reckon the mix on your hats is a little harsh, the hi hat sounds like it has alot of excessive 10k+ frequencies. The track is pretty cool, very balls out metal....
Forum: Original Recordings 05-23-2015, 03:51 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 230
Posted By TommyGunUk
Yo dude, thanks for the review! This track is...

Yo dude, thanks for the review!

This track is cool and really underground sounding. One thing which jumped out at me though is the rhythm/riff guitar tracks, be careful with these because there was...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-23-2015, 03:46 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 489
Posted By TommyGunUk
Thanks for your crit on my song man! The intro...

Thanks for your crit on my song man!

The intro is cool and spooky, and leads well into the bass and drum intro. Sounds really classic rock, reminds me of 70s and 80s action movies. The vocals remind...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-21-2015, 06:43 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 182
Posted By TommyGunUk
Yo dude, Pretty ballsy cool track. Tone of...

Yo dude,

Pretty ballsy cool track. Tone of rhythm gutars was cool especially, would be cool as with vocals. The clean bit is probably my favourite. When solo comes in the solo guitar is almost...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-21-2015, 06:37 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 259
Posted By TommyGunUk
Yo dude, thanks for your review of my track! This...

Yo dude, thanks for your review of my track! This piece is pretty cool, one thing which you wanna note is just accuracy of the rhythm of the playing of the tapped part in the beginning, occaisionally...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-21-2015, 06:46 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 204
Posted By TommyGunUk
Texture based piece, will C4C!

Uni took up most of my time, but I've finally finished a new track. Give it a listen, keen for opinions and thoughts and stuff. Will C4C!!

Its texture based, though still got solos and stuff. Played...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-23-2015, 02:46 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 801
Posted By TommyGunUk
thanks for the crit man! Appreciate it, link me...

thanks for the crit man! Appreciate it, link me to your stuff you want me to listen to
Forum: Original Recordings 02-14-2015, 05:57 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 336
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, This piece is pretty good, I reckon it...

Hey dude,

This piece is pretty good, I reckon it would work well as music for like a trailer or something for a movie or TV show. The production isnt bad, but you might wanna take a look at the...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-14-2015, 05:48 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 353
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, As far as production goes, this is very...

Hey man,

As far as production goes, this is very good. The drums are nice and crisp, the guitar tones are quite brilliant, and the balance is excellent, I can't criticise any part of it. As far as...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-11-2015, 04:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 338
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man The song is pretty good, the production...

Hey man

The song is pretty good, the production is very good. The tones on the guitar are nice too, the balance is great, I like what youve done there. The song has a creepy vibe which you have...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-11-2015, 04:19 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 255
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, The thing has a nice vibe, and the...

Hey man,

The thing has a nice vibe, and the soloing is pretty cool, it attracts attention. If I were you I would play around with the texture as the song goes on, with a sort of repetitive thing...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-10-2015, 06:51 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 318
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Rather good, the beginning especially...

Hey man,

Rather good, the beginning especially reminded me of Sithu Aye. The higher arpeggiated guitar after the beginning probably needs to be made a little bit louder, its almost drowned out by...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-10-2015, 06:43 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 241
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, The mix is good, in terms of balance,...

Hey dude,

The mix is good, in terms of balance, and the guitar lead tone is nice. My only remark is that it sounds just a tad empty, and that can be solved by having some extra tracks with clean...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-02-2015, 05:58 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 259
Posted By TommyGunUk
Im normally harsh in my reviews, but this track...

Im normally harsh in my reviews, but this track is literally perfect in every way

The lyrics are expressive, the title is a small glimpse into my own soul

The music, my God; I met a woman, got...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-01-2015, 03:46 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 256
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude. Sounds very Floyd. The solo guitar...

Hey dude. Sounds very Floyd. The solo guitar needs to be maybe slightly louder, its almost buried in the texture. The tone of the electric guitar is just a tad icy. What alot of people do when they...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-01-2015, 03:39 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 278
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Mix is good. The song has got some good...

Hey man,

Mix is good. The song has got some good compositional devices too; repetition, memorable melodies, not bad. The large amount of repetition makes it feel like it drags on a little, you want...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-28-2015, 05:41 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 266
Posted By TommyGunUk
You've already reviewed my stuff so dw about C4C...

You've already reviewed my stuff so dw about C4C haha

The track is pretty nice, sweet medieval folk sort of feel. Be careful with the mix, the vocals very nearly overpower the guitar. They dont, but...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-28-2015, 05:35 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 183
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, The opening track is mixed pretty well,...

Hey man,

The opening track is mixed pretty well, plenty of low end on the main riff guitar, its loud enough but it doesnt overpower the drums or bass. so good job there. The lead guitar is a tad...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-28-2015, 07:27 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 390
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, In the Mind of Homonculus is good. The...

Hey dude,

In the Mind of Homonculus is good. The beginning was very well done. In terms of production, the balance is almost perfect. There just needs to be a slight boost in volume in the vocals...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-26-2015, 12:26 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 199
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, Good mix. Good playing. You've got...

Hey dude,

Good mix. Good playing. You've got some proper ideas and stuff going, which I like. It gives your piece character and makes it recognisable as your own. Work on reincorporating your main...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-25-2015, 02:33 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 424
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, for the soloing in particular, yours...

Hey dude,

for the soloing in particular, yours wasn't bad by any means. The sweeps were a nice touch, and its fairly melodic. Its good, but it doesnt stand out in particular from other good...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-25-2015, 02:16 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 319
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Ill give most of my crit on the...

Hey man, Ill give most of my crit on the mixing.

The mix isnt too bad, but you need to have a look at things like the hi hat that jumps in occaisionally and stuff like that, make sure it isnt too...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-22-2015, 09:02 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 414
Posted By TommyGunUk
Thanks for the crit man, very detailed, and Im...

Thanks for the crit man, very detailed, and Im glad you enjoyed my tracks.

All I See - The piano part repeating is very good in the beginning, and it develops well as the song progresses. The heavy...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-22-2015, 06:13 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 442
Posted By TommyGunUk
The singing is relatively bluesy, a bit weird,...

The singing is relatively bluesy, a bit weird, but I like it. Riff is nice. Good atmosphere.

I think you need to think about other areas in your writing besides just the chords, and melodies and...
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