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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2015, 01:13 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 600
Posted By iain4444
I hate the morning. Waking up with a mouth...

I hate the morning.
Waking up with a mouth that's dry
and somehow still thirsty from the night before. remove 'and'
Alone.
In a bed for two,
I've got half a mind to burn
this mattress and play...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2015, 12:45 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 274
Posted By iain4444
VERSE I've got this feeling Deep inside A little...

VERSE
I've got this feeling
Deep inside
A little tingle
That I can't deny
A burning desire
I've never felt before
And it feels like fire baby
And it's really sore I'd rephrase this line, something...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2015, 12:36 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 282
Posted By iain4444
Hi, please just consider these as suggestions...

Hi, please just consider these as suggestions :)

If I could touch the sky
I'd bring you stars
Take my breathe like cyanide I assume you mean 'breath'?
And hold into this line seems unfinished, do...
Forum: The Pit 10-17-2013, 11:39 PM
Replies: 1,440
Views: 34,413
Posted By iain4444
it is awesome haha, and inducing them has been...

it is awesome haha, and inducing them has been covered extensively in this thread, maybe have a read back a bit. Also, check out:...
Forum: The Pit 10-17-2013, 10:02 PM
Replies: 1,440
Views: 34,413
Posted By iain4444
Fair enough. It's great that you enjoy your sleep...

Fair enough. It's great that you enjoy your sleep states so much haha. You're correct in thinking that you can improve conscious skills while dreaming - very interesting aspect to lucid dreams, and...
Forum: The Pit 10-17-2013, 09:51 PM
Replies: 1,440
Views: 34,413
Posted By iain4444
Do you have any interest in learning more...

Do you have any interest in learning more control? This sounds like a fairly low level of "lucidity" and control. How do you induce LDs?

Why don't you more consciously create and explore them? Or...
Forum: Gear Ads 06-16-2013, 01:37 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 195
Posted By iain4444
FS: Epi LP - CA/US

Hey, just looking for some price advice on this guitar I'm hoping to sell in Calgary, AB, CA. I looked up the serial number a bit ago and want to say it's mid 90s? I bought it from a friend years ago...
Forum: The Pit 09-25-2010, 01:15 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 9,621
Posted By iain4444
They aren't a big deal, and I would say that...

They aren't a big deal, and I would say that they're just a lazy, poor answer which will yield results of a similar quality. See below

WILDing is amazing, but you don't need your ipod or anything...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-29-2010, 08:07 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 994
Posted By iain4444
Hey cutie ;) I had an extended (and glorious)...

Hey cutie ;) I had an extended (and glorious) picnic this afternoon, hence not getting to this til now. I understand why some people are saying it doesnít have as many Ďlayersí as theyíd like to see,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-18-2010, 07:55 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 207
Posted By iain4444
I don't have much to say about this unless you...

I don't have much to say about this unless you care to explain it a bit? :)

I'm not a fan of the repetition of 'at night' - it's awkward
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-18-2010, 07:51 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 549
Posted By iain4444
God Broke Up With Me Herby, I like the title,...

God Broke Up With Me
Herby, I like the title, though Iím not entirely sure how it plays into your piece. It seriously implies satire, and you donít go that route

One missed call, one dropped...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-16-2010, 11:55 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 245
Posted By iain4444
Heyo, the link wasnít working, but Iím guessing...

Heyo, the link wasnít working, but Iím guessing this is the piece you were talking about? Letís see :)
I carry this bag with me
and it seems to weigh a ton.
And there are times that it bothers me ...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-12-2010, 03:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 442
Posted By iain4444
Hey :) good to hear back from you! I was...

Hey :) good to hear back from you!

I was referring to the fact that the speaking in the song seems to have all these emotions for someone, but they arenít communicating them at all. As in, you canít...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-12-2010, 12:20 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 442
Posted By iain4444
Alone With You So hey, I like where the title...

Alone With You
So hey, I like where the title implies this piece could go, but Iím not a fan of where you took it. Rather than go through it meticulously, Iíll mostly just say a few things here. ...
Forum: The Pit 12-11-2009, 09:26 PM
Replies: 646
Views: 58,891
Posted By iain4444
being a goof at the beach this...

being a goof at the beach this summer
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s118/iain4444/123.jpg

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s118/iain4444/1234.jpg
pretty happy with how things were going after...
Forum: The Pit 10-24-2009, 12:46 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 416
Posted By iain4444
I'd rather do this than any of the like 11 things...

I'd rather do this than any of the like 11 things i have to do for school asap.
Forum: The Pit 10-24-2009, 12:21 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 416
Posted By iain4444
i've always got a ton of things to do for my...

i've always got a ton of things to do for my classes ha, some of which i'm doing right now. Taking a break to help a fellow UGer out with catcher in the rye though :)

Don't procrastinate duder,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-29-2009, 03:08 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 380
Posted By iain4444
Yea I figured that's what it was about haha, and...

Yea I figured that's what it was about haha, and hey, there's about 2 things you can do about this girl: you either admit that the reason you only have a 'thimble' worth of ammunition is becuase...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-29-2009, 01:49 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 380
Posted By iain4444
Hey cous :) Here you sit, inexplicably, this a...

Hey cous :)

Here you sit,
inexplicably, this a bit off rhythmically, especially with the comma after it. Look at the definition of scorn: open or unqualified contempt; disdain Ė an object of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-28-2009, 11:23 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 195
Posted By iain4444
hey :) i just woke up and wasn't sure if i'd crit...

hey :) i just woke up and wasn't sure if i'd crit this or not as I feel fuzzy, but i'll make a few comments. The title's ok, and i see the point, though i'm not a huge fan. Haha, sorry that's not...
Forum: The Pit 07-16-2009, 12:29 AM
Replies: 1,440
Views: 34,413
Posted By iain4444
if you have a decently high level of lucidity,...

if you have a decently high level of lucidity, it's completely the same as being awake. Your brain doesn't differentiate between 'dream memories' and 'awake' ones, at least not physically. Or that's...
Forum: The Pit 07-13-2009, 04:12 PM
Replies: 433
Views: 5,791
Posted By iain4444
"The storm had passed, birds were chirping,...

"The storm had passed, birds were chirping, and everything in the world seemed more alive."

Heavier than heaven - charles cross. Definitely something i'd never pick out for myself, but a guy from...
Forum: The Pit 07-13-2009, 12:40 PM
Replies: 1,440
Views: 34,413
Posted By iain4444
Which would imply you know exactly what they are,...

Which would imply you know exactly what they are, or that you think you do.

See, what you think something is and what it is can be different things.

Lucid dreaming means you're consciously aware...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-08-2009, 10:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 272
Posted By iain4444
Yea i was thinking it was about drugs, though the...

Yea i was thinking it was about drugs, though the knight/maiden thing sort of threw that off. I agree with digupherbones about the cliche phrases/ideas you used - definitely go for something fresh...
Forum: Community Archives 07-08-2009, 10:31 PM
Replies: 12,376
Views: 229,514
Posted By iain4444
It's been a while - hi everyone! Tree planting...

It's been a while - hi everyone!
Tree planting for a day :) haha
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s118/iain4444/IMG_0229.jpg
Doin' my thing just outside my...
Forum: The Pit 07-08-2009, 10:49 AM
Replies: 1,440
Views: 34,413
Posted By iain4444
ha that's definitely what i was thinking too....

ha that's definitely what i was thinking too. Also, your stuff about WILDing sounded really neat! :) I'm not sure why you started to lose lucidity with the chef/dead baby thing, but all I can...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-07-2009, 11:46 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 348
Posted By iain4444
you're welcome :) glad to hear back from you...

you're welcome :) glad to hear back from you about this! And i'm glad you weren't discouraged by what I said. I understand that some poems are just quick little things, and that's great - you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-07-2009, 08:59 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 348
Posted By iain4444
prepared. hey :) I always write more than I...

prepared.
hey :) I always write more than I intend, so sorry in advance haha. The title's alright, can't think of anything better right now, but maybe by the end

out in the backyard,
where i once...
Forum: The Pit 06-25-2009, 01:38 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 291
Posted By iain4444
You know this already exists, right? Sperm doners...

You know this already exists, right? Sperm doners - not that it's easy to qualify and there are ethical issues involved, but still.

I wanna be a sage :)

edit: gahh ^
Forum: The Pit 06-14-2009, 08:11 PM
Replies: 1,440
Views: 34,413
Posted By iain4444
I'm glad everyone still feels the need to just...

I'm glad everyone still feels the need to just blab about dreams they've had in this thread haha.

This is because alcohol supresses REM sleep, and then once it's worked through your system (to some...
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