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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2015, 09:23 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 243
Posted By Bleed Away
I would change "hangs" to...

I would change "hangs" to "hang". But, apart from that, I really liked this; you did very well with the line-breaks!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2015, 09:15 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 135
Posted By Bleed Away
This is, by far, the best I have read from you....

This is, by far, the best I have read from you. Keep it up.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-21-2015, 07:46 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 98
Posted By Bleed Away
Stochastic

Here are the tribal drums/hear
the tribal drums - they are
falling apart. Now dance
with the flesh, until you have nothing left
to be ashamed of.

We are among the sands.
We are one with our...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-17-2015, 11:14 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 101
Posted By Bleed Away
Disconnectivity

The doing of Godís work:
Donít let the world turn your stone
into manna, as if such an origin
was never after your life [since the beginning]. I know
that pain.

You were born an orphan;
a miracle...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-16-2015, 01:37 PM
Replies: 2,152
Views: 72,411
Posted By Bleed Away
yo. where you doing your grad?

yo. where you doing your grad?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-15-2015, 03:12 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 755
Posted By Bleed Away
Thanks for this, btw - I really appreciate it! I...

Thanks for this, btw - I really appreciate it! I showed it to a few people and none of them got anyrthing from it, despite it being very relevant to what is going on today.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-14-2015, 07:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 338
Posted By Bleed Away
Absolutely no offense was taken. This is no...

Absolutely no offense was taken. This is no longer a sensitive subject for me (thanks to the therapy). I wanted this to have a different aesthetics to that of "Northern Atheist"; I didn't want things...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-14-2015, 06:26 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 116
Posted By Bleed Away
Byegone

Your body was never an offering -
it remains a mere strange
parallel of all the things I was
forced to hide.

No emotion resides here;
the door was left wide open.

You were gone as
the uncomfortable...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-09-2015, 03:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 338
Posted By Bleed Away
Dear Susan

I apologise via autobiography
with my essence suppressed;
I loved you more than a man should dare.
This was the end of the road for me;
I had lost myself
therein concatenation,
humans called it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:34 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 194
Posted By Bleed Away
The third stanza was particularly...

The third stanza was particularly thought-provoking.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:31 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 236
Posted By Bleed Away
I enjoyed this, especially the imagery in the...

I enjoyed this, especially the imagery in the first stanza! The only thing that distracted me while reading this was the lack of punctuation; the first stanza had none at all, while the second had...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:22 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 168
Posted By Bleed Away
I think this poem was constructed perfectly....

I think this poem was constructed perfectly. Instead of the format taking presidence over the meaning behind the poem, it complimented it very well. The line breaks were very calculated.

The only...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 05:45 AM
Replies: 2,152
Views: 72,411
Posted By Bleed Away
After being on this site for over 9 years, I have...

After being on this site for over 9 years, I have decided to invest on a guitar (acoustic and electric). Writing poetry for so long and listening to a copious amount of music over the years will...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2015, 08:02 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 251
Posted By Bleed Away
This is you at your best.

This is you at your best.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2015, 07:47 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 230
Posted By Bleed Away
Otto Rocket

Standing at the crossroads, impervious
to the soul that never existed
to begin with. I transformed
into the holy until I become one
with the ruin of not giving a damn
about mortality.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-04-2015, 12:59 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 180
Posted By Bleed Away
Nostalgia

Renaissance man
afraid of change -
afraid of the shrines that our ancestors once worshiped.
Itís funny how history often repeats itself
in a way that M-theory canít predict;
there are some things...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-30-2015, 12:17 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 224
Posted By Bleed Away
SchrŲdinger equation

Once upon a time
you wished for a peace of mind
out of principle.

A life of fallacy
soon became your sole domain.
You preserved your virginity
with the wildest of expectations;
It was never your...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-27-2015, 01:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 181
Posted By Bleed Away
Think Tank

I am a washer, you are
the village bicycle -
a local minimum; this is just
recreation. We are
just passengers,
with no morals to be found.

Was she Greek or
Spanish or
French or
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-26-2015, 08:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 187
Posted By Bleed Away
To a person

You are lucky
not to be destroyed.
You can thank God for
unhurting you. Later
life remains a novelty,
with a livelihood
you can not tame
or regain
or dedicate
to your endangered
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-25-2015, 10:16 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 165
Posted By Bleed Away
If You're Feeling Promiscuous

Numbers and depravity,
thereís no getting around it:
I made love to your silhouette,
I stopped your florescence
from throbbing. I just want to know
your name; I just want to dissect
your past. I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2015, 05:00 PM
Replies: 0
&&&
Views: 199
Posted By Bleed Away
&&&

I promised you
this and that,
among other things.

I was
drunk
you were
sober
and, for a moment,
you were a part of me.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2015, 11:52 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 273
Posted By Bleed Away
I think you guys have a point about the last line...

I think you guys have a point about the last line being too obvious. You guys make a good point about changing the title, but I fear that the meaning behind the poem might be lost if I did.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2015, 11:44 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 203
Posted By Bleed Away
zenopartition

You see, it runs in the family
the demons that my sister is facing...
I donít even know why
I am talking to you about this.
You said, ďThe good always die young!Ē
If thatís true, why do you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2015, 11:49 AM
Replies: 2,152
Views: 72,411
Posted By Bleed Away
A good idea might be for the WotW to compile...

A good idea might be for the WotW to compile their favourite 5 poems (that they have ever posted on this site) from each of the regulars here.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2015, 09:18 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 273
Posted By Bleed Away
MLK day

Dreams like post modernism.
Gestures like pointillism.
No event can embody a person
because the spirit never relinquishes
its place in human history.

My liturgy guides me
through the formless...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2015, 07:14 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 169
Posted By Bleed Away
Dihydrogen Monoxide

Everyday is grey -
CGI suns and streamlined
acid rain. No schools
left alive.
The streets lit
by inanimate rage;
I found myself
(((in the belly of)))
a returned dystopia
on an unassuming
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2015, 03:41 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 180
Posted By Bleed Away
Cruellest days

ďItís better to be dead than ignorant.
Itís better to be an illusion
than a headless chicken.
Itís surely better
to be safe
than sorry.Ē
These were the words spoken to me
since the days of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-15-2015, 10:50 PM
Replies: 2,152
Views: 72,411
Posted By Bleed Away
Long time no see, Randy!

Long time no see, Randy!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-13-2015, 07:08 PM
Replies: 2,152
Views: 72,411
Posted By Bleed Away
I find it hard to ever move on from here because...

I find it hard to ever move on from here because I grew up here (almost literally - been posting here since I was 13). I didn't know you lived in London, btw.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-12-2015, 06:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 181
Posted By Bleed Away
Arrow

Thereís a riot going on
but I donít know what for/I have no stead
for the seemingly arbitrary
world war.

I remain a poet;
a sequestor, with a wild voice,
of the untimely arrow
of death
that waits
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