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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Yesterday, 02:12 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 42
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Oswiecim

frog ho.ho.ho.ho.ho.ps in
the reclaim pond

_ _ _ _ _ m_achinenpistollen::dragon
flyfloating on
hayfever.
pollen is zyklon...................
...i felt it in
the staccaccatto tension of the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-18-2014, 06:54 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 171
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Yo man, first thing that I notice with this is...

Yo man, first thing that I notice with this is that the punctuation is a bit inconsistent especially near the start, for example you need a comma after "yes" in the second line. You may also need a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-11-2014, 10:54 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 520
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Those rules list accepted formats, including...

Those rules list accepted formats, including poetry.


hippieboy I enjoyed this, the only real thing that jumps out to me us that the last line is unnecessary. Both in that it is quite clumsy and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-29-2014, 12:40 PM
Replies: 4
09
Views: 324
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thank you very much for your comments on this,...

Thank you very much for your comments on this, especially on those two lines: I think I need to clarify their relevance and refer back to them in the piece, as in my head they are very important to...
Forum: Other 06-24-2014, 04:21 AM
Replies: 13,477
Sticky: Good rap?
Views: 536,408
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Anyone heard Sadistik's new track? I didn't...

Anyone heard Sadistik's new track? I didn't realise it had a verse by Eyedea until I heard it, gave me serious chills.

https://soundcloud.com/sadistik/chemical-burns-feat-eyedea-lotte-kestner
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-23-2014, 04:06 AM
Replies: 2,029
Views: 65,032
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I also think it's important to remember that even...

I also think it's important to remember that even physical attraction has more too it than just appearance, like seventh and jiminizzle said there is so much that can't be captured in a picture. I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-21-2014, 06:41 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 392
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I know this feeling. There is beauty there, like...

I know this feeling. There is beauty there, like vintage said I hope you find it. I enjoyed this piece, it is very touching and honest, I hope you found it cathartic.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-21-2014, 06:05 AM
Replies: 4
09
Views: 324
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thank you, this is definitely more familiar...

Thank you, this is definitely more familiar ground than Tapeworm (I feel that needs quite a bit more revision yet).
Forum: Hardcore 06-19-2014, 06:59 PM
Replies: 208
Views: 5,841
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I really dig that new track. However flowermouth...

I really dig that new track. However flowermouth was great too (at least I thought), but the album didn't do anything for me. I liked them more when they were doing EPs, that's what they're best at...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-19-2014, 05:54 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 386
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Sometimes brevity is best, this is one of those...

Sometimes brevity is best, this is one of those times.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-19-2014, 05:52 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 439
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thank you eccer. Those links are really eye...

Thank you eccer.

Those links are really eye opening, some fantastically experimental stuff there. I found this particularly interesting http://www.ubu.com/contemp/andrews/andrews2.html

I made a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-19-2014, 05:47 PM
Replies: 4
09
Views: 324
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
09

i loved your sanndy hair:::


:::you used to nearlywear it to
your shoulders - thicker
than syria, coarser thann
afghannistann,
you anti-cobainn,
you fringe sitter.
you wondered if opiates would...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-17-2014, 04:16 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 439
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thank you for those links, I don't tend to read...

Thank you for those links, I don't tend to read much poetry like this simply because I find it hard to track down, but it's one of my biggest self criticisms that I don't have much else to compare my...
Forum: Gear Building & Customizing 06-15-2014, 05:03 PM
Replies: 3,852
Views: 161,160
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Cool, thanks for your help. I'll try and track...

Cool, thanks for your help. I'll try and track down some sockets with the right number of connections.
Forum: The Pit 06-15-2014, 04:05 PM
Replies: 3,693
Views: 93,746
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Damn haven't heard of you, was hoping with the...

Damn haven't heard of you, was hoping with the tiny scene I might have done, I'll see if can track down any of your material and give it a listen anyway though.
Forum: The Pit 06-15-2014, 03:59 PM
Replies: 3,693
Views: 93,746
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Out of interest what band do you play in?

Out of interest what band do you play in?
Forum: The Pit 06-15-2014, 03:53 PM
Replies: 3,693
Views: 93,746
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Pleasantly surprised to see Palm Reader, is that...

Pleasantly surprised to see Palm Reader, is that pressing from tour or something? Basement are cool also.

Currently giving Women and Children by Author & Punisher a spin, which is /100. Maybe one...
Forum: Gear Building & Customizing 06-15-2014, 03:49 AM
Replies: 3,852
Views: 161,160
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Here's what they look like...

Here's what they look like http://www.avalon-zone.be/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/Monotron_unboxed.jpg

I know I thought it was weird too. The other thing that I found weird is that the...
Forum: Gear Building & Customizing 06-14-2014, 03:49 PM
Replies: 3,852
Views: 161,160
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I'm looking to replace the input and output jacks...

I'm looking to replace the input and output jacks on my korg monotron delay because they're a bit dodgy and I'm rehousing it for further mods, I've got a schematic but I'm just checking I'm...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-14-2014, 10:24 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 375
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Loved this.

Loved this.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-10-2014, 12:45 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 634
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I can properly feel you getting in the flow of...

I can properly feel you getting in the flow of images in that second version, it is a very enjoyable read.

My one little gripe is the double colon, it seems a touch out of place in this piece, it is...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-10-2014, 12:36 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 396
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Oh man that last line. This feels like part of...

Oh man that last line.

This feels like part of something bigger though, almost an aside from another piece.

Hang on in there, things will get better.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-10-2014, 12:28 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 439
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thank you, I can certainly say there are some...

Thank you, I can certainly say there are some weird feelings attached to it. I do want to clean this up, there are a couple of moments I'm not sure are working.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-10-2014, 07:19 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 439
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Tapeworm

i breathe in breeze
blocks, muggy
and chewy like styrofoam
empty stomach
insulation, i
drown in plasticine:
warm, stifling,
a womb of custard skin,
as if i am drowninnnnng
innothinnng as if there...
Forum: The Pit 06-01-2014, 05:11 PM
Replies: 12,672
Views: 143,055
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I feel like we need another electronic album,...

I feel like we need another electronic album, mostly because I want some motivation to make beat driven noisey stuff that doesn't fit into my current project.

While I'm here...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-28-2014, 10:04 AM
Replies: 7
nPP
Views: 388
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
This reminded me of "the city refuses to...

This reminded me of "the city refuses to confide in me and there's no one left to care". I love these short, raw pieces you write: they really get to me.

One question, do you intend this to only be...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-26-2014, 10:49 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 450
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Not only does it depend on the band but it can...

Not only does it depend on the band but it can vary from song to song.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-25-2014, 12:55 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 378
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Absolutely bloody genius.

Absolutely bloody genius.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-25-2014, 12:42 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 292
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thanks guys. I'm glad you think this is...

Thanks guys. I'm glad you think this is reminiscent of my older stuff, I'm planning on using this as lyrics and I really wanted something that represented where my writing comes from.

Those two...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-24-2014, 02:59 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 450
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Chances are it means that everyone will have had...

Chances are it means that everyone will have had some part in everything, which is normal in a band, likelihood is the singer will have had the biggest part in the melody. Also the lyrics could be...
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