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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2013, 10:45 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 285
Posted By jod23
im returning the favor personal piece i see...

im returning the favor





personal piece i see a graveyard in the distance in a cold damp fall morning. you could add some fall season element to it after it was a breezy morning to make more...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2013, 10:20 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 269
Posted By jod23
thanks you for the input. most of i wrote was...

thanks you for the input. most of i wrote was from society point of view an cliche for the most part. need to put some thought into this one haha
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2013, 01:34 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 269
Posted By jod23
existence thru pre mediation

look at me wolf moon
i dont take social news media serious anymore
attention ridden morons living in the western desert
beneath satins serpents running wild
chasing religion an technology, trying to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2013, 03:14 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 238
Posted By jod23
US an A

nothing in return studying ancient patterns of stars
to navigate an draw myself into life
escaping to the mountains filled with snow cap ice cream

from beneath
ghosts filled the sidewalks
deep trip...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-02-2013, 12:19 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 255
Posted By jod23
Fargo

Snow an ice wrapped around
dancing together on the roadway
creating fusion an textures
of fine glass an happiness
as the cold tempature marked it's place
already thinking about spring
filling in...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2013, 03:18 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 324
Posted By jod23
thanks

thanks
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-08-2013, 07:28 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 324
Posted By jod23
bluegrass sunrise

waking up seconds ago
breathing in the fresh evergreen air
as the sun rose like a giant peach
stretching across northern Georgiaís slumber
endless sky filled with gold an rubies
as today may be a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-02-2013, 02:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 210
Posted By jod23
Captain of the Ship

wolf moon glazing across chicagoland
lane change to the far right lane
eyes of a vulture the road way, headlights to the front
while heavy rain screaming on the windowshield
drifting from the sky...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-08-2012, 08:52 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 213
Posted By jod23
Lull

white napkins lay quietly naked
on top of rocky mountains in one piece
talk radio communicating my thoughts
preaching about the fiscal cliff diving
as the afternoon lull taking ahold of me...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-09-2012, 03:52 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 692
Posted By jod23
nice piece of writing here... very personal

nice piece of writing here... very personal
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-26-2012, 10:33 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 198
Posted By jod23
morning's dream sequence

waking up from a siberian hibernation
lazy eye drifting towards the great lake
where blue tendrils drift from the smooth surface
tasting aquatic waters mouth to mouth
an swimming towards the sandy...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-08-2012, 12:23 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 382
Posted By jod23
glad u liked it madzaa, took it as a spoken word...

glad u liked it madzaa, took it as a spoken word poem. its about a dream i had directing towards a painting. focused on random ideas of a telemarketer selling stuff over the landline phone.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-03-2012, 04:13 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 382
Posted By jod23
thanks for your feedback.

thanks for your feedback.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-03-2012, 03:03 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 302
Posted By jod23
i dont think its a controversial subject. sounds...

i dont think its a controversial subject. sounds like a ole country western tune.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-03-2012, 02:51 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 234
Posted By jod23
I watched it rain from my roof last...

I watched it rain from my roof last night
cigarette smoke filled my lungs
and while I watched the clouds elapse
I felt her face passing me by

were u on the roof smoking a cigarette? or watching it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-03-2012, 02:18 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 408
Posted By jod23
strong introduction and the ending. i like the...

strong introduction and the ending. i like the opportunistic feeling from beginning to end. i get the feel of a postive vibe from believing in an afterlife. wishing a love one a happy birthday. heres...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-01-2012, 11:05 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 382
Posted By jod23
telemarketer

sunday afternoon
cool september breeze going for a stroll
consistently knocking on my front door
had enough, anxiety from this hangover
dog of the hair that bit me
heat index unbearable, humid an...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-22-2012, 11:13 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 302
Posted By jod23
yah i could do that with a delay at the end......

yah i could do that with a delay at the end... 'you're happy' is the inspiration in this piece. its about thinking on a certain topic daily an somehow trying to block it before it goes in full...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-21-2012, 09:22 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 302
Posted By jod23
thanks for the input. prb need to go back an make...

thanks for the input. prb need to go back an make some edit changes an work on for a stronger ending.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-17-2012, 08:30 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 302
Posted By jod23
Latter days of Summer

molting time with my hands
on the steering wheel
as the deck of cards unfolds
queen of hearts melting my fears again
for the last time paying cash for the toll
as tears pour down from above
into...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-03-2012, 12:34 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 160
Posted By jod23
Vital Functions

too much white noise
pollution from my stem cells
hovering in the vast clouds where green aliens
glance back an forth playing with their voodoo dolls
controlling the weather in this particular...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2012, 11:39 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 175
Posted By jod23
dense heat

hot humid temperatures traveling in great distance
across the mid-section of american flat lands
steady are my hands, air conditioning in full effect
manage to take a walk down to the nearest...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-21-2012, 10:41 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 199
Posted By jod23
Clear Cutting

gaunt figure with slender posture, similar in ideas an thoughts
camping an awkward moments, drove myself crazy behind the wheel
brought beauty with comfort while the humid temperature reached 100...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-17-2012, 10:51 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 289
Posted By jod23
i like this, my prespective from this is...

i like this, my prespective from this is searching for pleasure an ideas, "money, sex, love, but eventually it'll drag me down an develope negative thoughts. its more on a conscience level of self in...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-14-2012, 11:18 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 295
Posted By jod23
some suggestions... "two coffee mugs...

some suggestions...

"two coffee mugs staining the rug"
this line is good but add a descriptive element or color for the staining. blackness crept in the room from the stain thus leading further into...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-13-2012, 11:09 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 630
Posted By jod23
need some cookie monster vocals an ur set...

need some cookie monster vocals an ur set...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-13-2012, 10:32 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 531
Posted By jod23
the same women the narrator talking about, her...

the same women the narrator talking about, her singing would be sweet, if only...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-12-2012, 12:27 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 724
Posted By jod23
i like this piece but like to make a suggestion...

i like this piece but like to make a suggestion with the first line.

"You know Iím not okay"
too vague because it doesnt strike like matches to start a fire.

I'd use, I know your not happy,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-12-2012, 12:17 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 455
Posted By jod23
my thoughts on this peice relates from a...

my thoughts on this peice relates from a conversation between the individual an the mirror on a daily basis. could be morning or night. overall it has a nice feel an flow to it.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-12-2012, 12:12 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 140
Posted By jod23
Pumpkinbuster

filled with grease an dirt
covering my oily caucasian face
this pimple erupted with my own discretion
while volcano ash began to spread like a butter
from the desolute martian surface
cheeks, nose,...
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