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Forum: Cover Songs 05-11-2014, 01:06 AM
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Posted By jeremygp24
Pierce The Veil - "She Makes Dirty Words Sound Pretty" Cover by Jeremy Paragoso

https://soundcloud.com/jeremy-paragoso/my-song-4


Recorded off my iphone

Constructive criticism is appreciated.
General feedback is also appreciated.
Thank you =D
Forum: Original Recordings 11-08-2013, 06:27 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 251
Posted By jeremygp24
oh duh

oh duh
Forum: Original Recordings 11-08-2013, 06:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 251
Posted By jeremygp24
hahaha sorry about the title. I actually don't...

hahaha sorry about the title. I actually don't know how to reduce the 8-9 kHz hiss, i'll google it!
Forum: Original Recordings 11-06-2013, 02:46 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 251
Posted By jeremygp24
if anyones interested my first song is called...

if anyones interested my first song is called untitled on my soundcloud
Forum: Original Recordings 11-06-2013, 02:45 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 251
Posted By jeremygp24
my 2nd song ever written is almost done

any advice?

https://soundcloud.com/jeremy-paragoso/pussy-money-weed-original
Forum: Singing & Vocals 10-01-2013, 01:37 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 566
Posted By jeremygp24
Thanks for the advice, sincerely. It was really...

Thanks for the advice, sincerely. It was really helpful and detailed. I'm workin on some higher quality stuff now.
Forum: Singing & Vocals 09-07-2013, 02:49 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 566
Posted By jeremygp24
is my voice good enough to do solo stuff?

I want to do some local music projects but do I have the voice to be a solo acoustic artist? Or should I start/join a local band? I know people say practice but sometimes it's not enough...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 05-21-2013, 12:05 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 290
Posted By jeremygp24
could i get some feedback on my vocals?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Q5DR-g0aiE

would love feedback and criticism. I'll also check your video out if you want
Forum: Cover Songs 04-15-2013, 02:46 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 341
Posted By jeremygp24
i really like the tone of your voice, has a good...

i really like the tone of your voice, has a good bass tone to it. as for the singing, it was good man! really powerful and on key
Forum: Cover Songs 04-15-2013, 01:02 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 221
Posted By jeremygp24
God Damn You're Beautiful (vocal cover)

well it has guitar too but it's really basic guitar just to make a cover

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Q5DR-g0aiE&feature=youtube_gdata
Forum: Singing & Vocals 04-15-2013, 12:53 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 429
Posted By jeremygp24
check out my singing! need criticism

well I'm trying to get better and better everyday and I would appreciate criticism!
just whipped this up during procrastinating my homework haha
anyways here it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-10-2013, 03:50 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 294
Posted By jeremygp24
Untitled Song (love song) give me advice!

BOY:
Baby, will you ever come back home?
Iíve been taking steps in the sand alone
Come a little closer to the sea
Listen to the waves and hear my plea


CHORUS (Boy):
What happened here, what...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 04-08-2013, 02:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 555
Posted By jeremygp24
would paying for private singing lessons be worth it?

they're pretty expensive but singing and playing guitar is my passion
but I already took choir, so I'm not sure if I should bother
anyone here that took singing lessons and have input?

heres my...
Forum: Original Recordings 04-08-2013, 02:20 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 429
Posted By jeremygp24
bump

bump
Forum: Original Recordings 03-20-2013, 03:44 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 429
Posted By jeremygp24
thanks man! i'm adding a last part at the end...

thanks man! i'm adding a last part at the end where I start to belt just to add dynamic to the song
Forum: Original Recordings 03-17-2013, 08:30 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 429
Posted By jeremygp24
bump

bump
Forum: Original Recordings 03-15-2013, 07:31 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 429
Posted By jeremygp24
thanks guys!

thanks guys!
Forum: Original Recordings 03-15-2013, 06:47 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 429
Posted By jeremygp24
first song ever

hello guys, I just started my interest in writing songs! this is just an extreme prototype and it's not done yet. but tell me what you think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfvCuddaLWw
Forum: Singing & Vocals 02-04-2013, 08:06 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 350
Posted By jeremygp24
how are my vocals in this song?

any tips or criticism?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhHhuk_5ll8
Forum: Singing & Vocals 01-12-2013, 06:29 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 364
Posted By jeremygp24
sang a hard song

pretty sure i screwed up a lot in this but i'm not really that experienced
which parts glare out as mistakes?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gZfBHN8dQ3Q
Forum: Singing & Vocals 01-02-2013, 07:05 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 495
Posted By jeremygp24
and yes we were both reading the lyrics, we tried...

and yes we were both reading the lyrics, we tried to not make it obvious
Forum: Singing & Vocals 01-02-2013, 06:31 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 495
Posted By jeremygp24
thanks for the feedback man. yeah I see the pitch...

thanks for the feedback man. yeah I see the pitch issues AFTER I sing it unfortunately haha
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-31-2012, 10:32 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 495
Posted By jeremygp24
how is my singing? and hers?

in this vid

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqn45fHCQTI&feature=youtube_gdata
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-22-2012, 11:29 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 722
Posted By jeremygp24
I did a cover that really pushed my range and I...

I did a cover that really pushed my range and I felt like this needs a lot of constructive criticism. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YQVxQldWboY&feature=youtube_gdata
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-07-2012, 05:32 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 722
Posted By jeremygp24
I re-did my turn right cover, sadly I deleted the...

I re-did my turn right cover, sadly I deleted the original version.
For those who saw it, is there any improvement?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GKbwPfT3968&feature=plcp
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-07-2012, 04:36 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 722
Posted By jeremygp24
only reason is because it was easy on guitar haha...

only reason is because it was easy on guitar haha but okay I'll sing without guitar next time since I don't know any other songs.

what you said about someone being in a room with me really helps a...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-07-2012, 03:53 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 722
Posted By jeremygp24
okay I'll work on the vowels, could you elaborate...

okay I'll work on the vowels, could you elaborate on the projecting forward?
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-07-2012, 01:43 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 722
Posted By jeremygp24
here's the new...

here's the new cover.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4fOZljiV-c&feature=youtube_gdata


still some breathyness on some parts eh



I'm gonna post a song that requires more range soon, I just have a...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-06-2012, 02:15 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 722
Posted By jeremygp24
haha basically I heard the original song and it...

haha basically I heard the original song and it was airy so I just copied it, and okay ill make a new cover today
Forum: Cover Songs 12-06-2012, 02:51 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 164
Posted By jeremygp24
not very good but just starting up, so I made a quick cover cause I wanted criticism

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4fOZljiV-c


I would like criticism please :)
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