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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-01-2012, 11:56 PM
Replies: 2
Run
Views: 301
Posted By PCADriven
Run

Hope you guys enjoy, lemme know watcha think, and C4C :)

Verse1
I live, without ever feeling
Anything, that Iím sick of hearing
Are the problems that I lose too
She stands without ever kneeling
In...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-11-2011, 11:03 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 380
Posted By PCADriven
Thanks for the critiques and thoughts guys, I...

Thanks for the critiques and thoughts guys, I appreciate it. I see what you mean about the rhyming being generic and more style than substance, and I'll be looking at it closely when I revise it....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-08-2011, 10:40 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 209
Posted By PCADriven
The entire piece, while full of imagery, did not...

The entire piece, while full of imagery, did not seem (to me at least) to have a very followable concept or story behind it. the imagery itself was questioning and dark, which i enjoyed.

Overall,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2011, 09:58 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 288
Posted By PCADriven
I really enjoyed the tone and flow of this piece,...

I really enjoyed the tone and flow of this piece, i found it to be very well written. the imagery was very nicely placed throughout and painted a clear picture not of images per say, but of emotion,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2011, 09:43 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 380
Posted By PCADriven
Not One More Word

AN: C4C! Thanks for reading!

Verse1
When I see these lies
The ones that havenít died
I feel like falling apart inside
With your ghost locked away
I have to wonder why
Itís so hard to get by
When I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-16-2011, 08:28 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 319
Posted By PCADriven
Thanks for the critiques guys! MusicMan I'll crit...

Thanks for the critiques guys! MusicMan I'll crit yours tonight.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-12-2011, 11:45 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 319
Posted By PCADriven
If You Want Me To Stay, You're Gonna Need Some Schackles (Working Title)

New song I wrote yesterday, C4C and please enjoy!

verse1
My reflections staring back at me
Everyone Iíve wronged a mirror
A conduit for my frustration
A quiet corner for contemplation
Has alluded...
Forum: Promote YOUR Band 10-09-2011, 04:18 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 99
Posted By PCADriven
Waiting On Gabe (Alt Rock)

Hey guys, check out my band Waiting On Gabe here:

Facebook (http://www.facebook.com/pages/Waiting-On-Gabe/160304267392867?sk=wall) (song can be found on the BandPage tab)

SoundCloud...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-17-2011, 10:55 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 516
Posted By PCADriven
First off, thank you for the critique on my...

First off, thank you for the critique on my piece, it is much appreciated and I will be taking your words into careful consideration when I edit it.

now, as for your song. I felt like this was...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-17-2011, 10:47 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,000
Posted By PCADriven
First off, thanks for the critique on my piece. ...

First off, thanks for the critique on my piece. Please know that I will take your review very seriously when editing my song.

Now, onto your piece. I thought this very well written. The structure...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-15-2011, 11:29 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 262
Posted By PCADriven
Losing Ground (With Or Without You)

AN: C4C, enjoy!!!

Verse1
Whoís going to believe that I
In all my years
Have never felt anything
Without it putting me in a corner
I canít believe that you
In your few days
Have felt everything
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-04-2011, 11:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 345
Posted By PCADriven
Thanks for the critiques and suggestions guys,...

Thanks for the critiques and suggestions guys, much appreciated!!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-31-2011, 09:56 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 164
Posted By PCADriven
I thought this was a good set of lyrics, it took...

I thought this was a good set of lyrics, it took abstract and mystical concepts (gorgons, Greek mythology) and grounded them in relatable themes, which is not an easy task, so i commend you on...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-31-2011, 01:53 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 345
Posted By PCADriven
My Life In My Pocket

AN: Pretty straightforward tune I recently wrote, lemme know watch think and as always, C4C!! Enjoy!

My Life in My Pocket

Verse
I spent my time pretending
That this wasnít real
I wasted my time...
Forum: Pop Punk & Emo 08-19-2011, 05:57 PM
Replies: 288
Views: 8,682
Posted By PCADriven
the new song is actually pretty good in my...

the new song is actually pretty good in my opinion, different yes but its nice to see them expanding musically a bit
Forum: Pop Punk & Emo 08-09-2011, 03:18 AM
Replies: 71
Views: 1,290
Posted By PCADriven
U said u don't have wireless but if u ever do,...

U said u don't have wireless but if u ever do, around the worlds are great.

Try to make ur stage moves personal and within the intensity or feel of the song. Good luck out there!
Forum: Pop Punk & Emo 08-04-2011, 01:09 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 4,124
Posted By PCADriven
isnt he dropping a new record this fall full band...

isnt he dropping a new record this fall full band style?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-03-2011, 11:36 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 395
Posted By PCADriven
Thanks for all the crits guys, preciate it! I...

Thanks for all the crits guys, preciate it!

I eliminated the into upon looking at it and realizing it was four lines of cliche lol. I also reworked a part of the ending of the second verse, so...
Forum: Pop Punk & Emo 08-02-2011, 06:20 PM
Replies: 169
Views: 4,337
Posted By PCADriven
I thought warped had great variety this year to...

I thought warped had great variety this year to be honest by incorporating a few more mainstream acts along with some indie ones while leaving the meat of the tour to the usual suspects.
Forum: Pop Punk & Emo 08-02-2011, 06:17 PM
Replies: 49
Views: 1,351
Posted By PCADriven
The album was overall mediocre with a few...

The album was overall mediocre with a few standout moments that show great promise. I think the fact that Ronnie hasnt been exposed to new music in a long time because of his jail sentence really...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-02-2011, 12:48 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 157
Posted By PCADriven
I liked this. It had a dirty, almost tired...

I liked this. It had a dirty, almost tired half-eloquence to it (if that makes sense). The rhyme scheme you were using I thought worked quite well in keeping a certain flow going throughout the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-02-2011, 12:36 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 222
Posted By PCADriven
I found this to be a frustrating read and I'm...

I found this to be a frustrating read and I'm sure that would translate into a frustrating listen as well. You play around with both grounded and abstract concepts (following someone home and then...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-02-2011, 12:33 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 314
Posted By PCADriven
Dont double post it, the mods dont like it. fair...

Dont double post it, the mods dont like it. fair warning, its happened to me before.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-01-2011, 11:51 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 304
Posted By PCADriven
First off, thanks for the crit on my piece, much...

First off, thanks for the crit on my piece, much appreciated.

Secondly, I enjoyed this. It had a nice flow and had just enough imagery to not feel like another little semi-sappy song, which I think...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-01-2011, 11:33 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 476
Posted By PCADriven
I really, really liked this. It wasn't overdone...

I really, really liked this. It wasn't overdone and had what felt like organic one liners instead of ones where the author went back and intentionally put them in his/her piece. That being said, I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-01-2011, 11:28 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 255
Posted By PCADriven
Ive posted more than 20 songs and poems here and...

Ive posted more than 20 songs and poems here and all ive gotten are nice critiques and criticism, no one tries to steal your shit, promise.

But then again, maybe my stuff isnt worth stealing..:P
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-01-2011, 11:27 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 232
Posted By PCADriven
This had a very simple, honest feels to it, which...

This had a very simple, honest feels to it, which I thought was well done. I liked the change from "half sublime" to "full sublime" at the end, I thought that was a neat way to tie those two stanzas...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-01-2011, 11:24 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 395
Posted By PCADriven
Every Song You've Ever Heard Is A Lie (Just Like This One Is)

AN: Haven't been inspired to write in awhile, but this just hit me and I wanna know what you all think! Thanks for reading and C4C!


Verse1

When this rock hits your window
I hope it cracks and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-21-2011, 12:08 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 150
Posted By PCADriven
Have You Ever Thought? (WIP)

AN: Hey guys, I wrote this song with the beat in mind, and I hope that you guys can recognize it as easily as I can when I look at these lyrics. Also, there is no chorus (yet), so these are all...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-23-2011, 08:27 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 135
Posted By PCADriven
I enjoyed this. I thought the imagery was simple...

I enjoyed this. I thought the imagery was simple and quaint, and by the end i could really see and understand the scene you were depicting. Good job.

Unfortunately, i dont understand Italian so if...
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