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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-26-2015, 01:52 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,965
Posted By Bleed Away
Great to read this! It's hard to believe that a...

Great to read this! It's hard to believe that a site dedicated to guitars can do this. I am glad that things are getting better for you!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-26-2015, 01:51 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,965
Posted By Bleed Away
I really hope this place never dies. Even though...

I really hope this place never dies. Even though the layout of this website has been exactly the same since 2002, I want it to remain this way.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-24-2015, 11:23 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 285
Posted By Bleed Away
There's nothing that I can add to this. You...

There's nothing that I can add to this. You managed to describe the feeling of longing and lust so intricately yet living a bit of room for the reader to interprete the nuances that surround it....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-23-2015, 09:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 172
Posted By Bleed Away
Fractals and others

I thought I had written all that I had to say... But then this hit me, out of nowhere. I am...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-21-2015, 11:43 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 192
Posted By Bleed Away
"I will always hate myself" (my last poem for a while)

I don’t want to hurt anyone, I just want to die
and tip the scales, like some kind of minor miracle; I am
a fool, I go outside too often, only to find myself
greeting the ground - Baba purge would be...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-16-2015, 08:58 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 209
Posted By Bleed Away
Chasing for something that doesn’t belong to you

Chasing for something that never belonged to me,
my mother taught me better than that; I once cared
about women, around the same time that I wished
I was a better person. Now I am unapologetic
for my...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-14-2015, 05:27 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 151
Posted By Bleed Away
Too f*cking different

This is my city, uncultivated since the lost era
of defying Satan. I am inanimate. I will live my final days
alone. I have written these words (somewhere) before. I am caught in
a sensation, not felt...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2015, 06:24 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 229
Posted By Bleed Away
4AM in London

No one knows me. At all.
I first came here when I was only 6
with my mum, back when a sense of family still existed
back when I wanted to live in America, instead.
I was the successor of something...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2015, 10:11 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 252
Posted By Bleed Away
Get some help, bruh

Our smiles are reminiscent
of the beheaded, unsuspecting
but frantic. Who will survive the approaching
last days? Society with eyes like dartboards -
only carcasses found, “that is us
right now”...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2015, 09:23 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 452
Posted By Bleed Away
I would change "hangs" to...

I would change "hangs" to "hang". But, apart from that, I really liked this; you did very well with the line-breaks!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2015, 09:15 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 376
Posted By Bleed Away
This is, by far, the best I have read from you....

This is, by far, the best I have read from you. Keep it up.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-21-2015, 07:46 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 333
Posted By Bleed Away
Stochastic

Here are the tribal drums/hear
the tribal drums - they are
falling apart. Now dance
with the flesh, until you have
nothing left
to be ashamed of.

We are among the sands.
We are one with our...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-17-2015, 11:14 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 146
Posted By Bleed Away
Disconnectivity

The doing of God’s work:
Don’t let the world turn your stone
into manna, as if such an origin
was never after your life [since the beginning]. I know
that pain.

You were born an orphan;
a miracle...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-16-2015, 01:37 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,965
Posted By Bleed Away
yo. where you doing your grad?

yo. where you doing your grad?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-15-2015, 03:12 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 898
Posted By Bleed Away
Thanks for this, btw - I really appreciate it! I...

Thanks for this, btw - I really appreciate it! I showed it to a few people and none of them got anyrthing from it, despite it being very relevant to what is going on today.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-14-2015, 07:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 385
Posted By Bleed Away
Absolutely no offense was taken. This is no...

Absolutely no offense was taken. This is no longer a sensitive subject for me (thanks to the therapy). I wanted this to have a different aesthetics to that of "Northern Atheist"; I didn't want things...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-09-2015, 03:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 385
Posted By Bleed Away
Dear Susan

I apologise via autobiography
with my essence suppressed;
I loved you more than a man should dare.
This was the end of the road for me;
I had lost myself
therein concatenation,
humans called it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:34 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 229
Posted By Bleed Away
The third stanza was particularly...

The third stanza was particularly thought-provoking.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:31 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 283
Posted By Bleed Away
I enjoyed this, especially the imagery in the...

I enjoyed this, especially the imagery in the first stanza! The only thing that distracted me while reading this was the lack of punctuation; the first stanza had none at all, while the second had...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:22 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 212
Posted By Bleed Away
I think this poem was constructed perfectly....

I think this poem was constructed perfectly. Instead of the format taking presidence over the meaning behind the poem, it complimented it very well. The line breaks were very calculated.

The only...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 05:45 AM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,965
Posted By Bleed Away
After being on this site for over 9 years, I have...

After being on this site for over 9 years, I have decided to invest on a guitar (acoustic and electric). Writing poetry for so long and listening to a copious amount of music over the years will...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2015, 08:02 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 296
Posted By Bleed Away
This is you at your best.

This is you at your best.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2015, 07:47 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 267
Posted By Bleed Away
Otto Rocket

Standing at the crossroads, impervious
to the soul that never existed
to begin with. I transformed
into the holy until I become one
with the ruin of not giving a damn
about mortality.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-04-2015, 12:59 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 203
Posted By Bleed Away
Nostalgia

Renaissance man
afraid of change -
afraid of the shrines that our ancestors once worshiped.
It’s funny how history often repeats itself
in a way that M-theory can’t predict;
there are some things...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-30-2015, 12:17 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 237
Posted By Bleed Away
Schrödinger equation

Once upon a time
you wished for a peace of mind
out of principle.

A life of fallacy
soon became your sole domain.
You preserved your virginity
with the wildest of expectations;
It was never your...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-27-2015, 01:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 199
Posted By Bleed Away
Think Tank

I am a washer, you are
the village bicycle -
a local minimum; this is just
recreation. We are
just passengers,
with no morals to be found.

Was she Greek or
Spanish or
French or
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-26-2015, 08:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 203
Posted By Bleed Away
To a person

You are lucky
not to be destroyed.
You can thank God for
unhurting you. Later
life remains a novelty,
with a livelihood
you can not tame
or regain
or dedicate
to your endangered
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-25-2015, 10:16 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 179
Posted By Bleed Away
If You're Feeling Promiscuous

Numbers and depravity,
there’s no getting around it:
I made love to your silhouette,
I stopped your florescence
from throbbing. I just want to know
your name; I just want to dissect
your past. I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2015, 05:00 PM
Replies: 0
&&&
Views: 209
Posted By Bleed Away
&&&

I promised you
this and that,
among other things.

I was
drunk
you were
sober
and, for a moment,
you were a part of me.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2015, 11:52 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 316
Posted By Bleed Away
I think you guys have a point about the last line...

I think you guys have a point about the last line being too obvious. You guys make a good point about changing the title, but I fear that the meaning behind the poem might be lost if I did.
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