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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-19-2013, 12:00 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 677
Posted By skagitup
aside from the rhymes at the end of the...

aside from the rhymes at the end of the penultimate stanza which i am not mad about, i absolutely love this. it is ****ing incredible.

& have missed you too
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-03-2013, 02:17 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 651
Posted By skagitup
final line gave me shivers. you're so good

final line gave me shivers. you're so good
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-26-2013, 01:26 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 793
Posted By skagitup
cheers for wotw really appreciate that. hey...

cheers for wotw really appreciate that. hey jimi, in tx just till Monday then in Colombia for a couple of months. are you in texas?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-26-2013, 01:21 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 250
Posted By skagitup
can't remember if we're supposed to hate...

can't remember if we're supposed to hate eachother but yea anyway this is nice and also i Love the myrmidon one you did with the sphere. enough so that a while after i read it i got the urge to read...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2013, 02:15 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 452
Posted By skagitup
very handsome

very handsome
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2013, 01:08 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 793
Posted By skagitup
thanks seventh. hey dylan. yeah was great man....

thanks seventh.

hey dylan. yeah was great man. i'm actually in the states at the moment - lufkin, texas of all places. how/where abouts are you these days?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2013, 12:11 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 793
Posted By skagitup
WotW: per rachel ho servito & non per lea

my room was bare, totally barren
a grey half-open suitcase with clothes spilt out over the concrete
my bed had no sheets, and just one pillow
which i let you have

and, as we sat cross-legged on the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-07-2012, 10:00 AM
Replies: 2,091
Views: 68,429
Posted By skagitup
not bad. just finished uni. how are you? ...

not bad. just finished uni. how are you? that's the question on everybody's lips
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-04-2012, 09:50 AM
Replies: 2,091
Views: 68,429
Posted By skagitup
hey man

hey man
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-03-2012, 08:36 PM
Replies: 2,091
Views: 68,429
Posted By skagitup
congrats

congrats
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-03-2012, 02:03 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 773
Posted By skagitup
beautiful

beautiful
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2012, 03:30 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 304
Posted By skagitup
got arab spring before arab spring. "we're...

got arab spring before arab spring.

"we're stargazers for stargazing's sake"

not sorry for resurrecting this. simultaneously subtle & unsubtle somehow. v.nice.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2012, 03:25 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 645
Posted By skagitup
+1 love it

+1

love it
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2012, 03:24 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 352
Posted By skagitup
brilliant opening image

brilliant opening image
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2012, 03:18 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 776
Posted By skagitup
"Today, confetti snow limped from the...

"Today, confetti snow limped from the sky
and coated the world in cocaine."

yay

incredible
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-02-2011, 09:40 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 453
Posted By skagitup
i think the deer in the headlights line is just a...

i think the deer in the headlights line is just a bit boring really, it drags down the vibe of the whole verse/chorus. if these are lyrics though then i can't really comment. melody has a habit of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2011, 02:16 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 396
Posted By skagitup
sentence with the air and space magazines in the...

sentence with the air and space magazines in the first paragraph got a bit convoluted.

only thing i noticed really. incredible ending. love it & hope you're well man
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2011, 02:00 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 234
Posted By skagitup
to see a man just fall apart

to see a man just fall apart,
& leave his up in different places
to see a man just lose his heart
and start to collect younger faces

TO WATCH THE GIRL YOU'VE LOVED FOR YEARS
and know that, still,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-30-2011, 11:28 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 554
Posted By skagitup
this was beautiful. the final line was stunning,...

this was beautiful. the final line was stunning, it does just what you want a final line to do. those lines are the most, possibly the only important lines. i don't consider it unreasonable to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-30-2011, 11:13 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 738
Posted By skagitup
just got back from the airport... i appreciate...

just got back from the airport... i appreciate this so much guys. leave links for return crits but i'll search around and try and get some comments down
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-23-2011, 09:37 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 181
Posted By skagitup
"it is quite flat, but full of hair that...

"it is quite flat, but full of hair that almost forms the shape of..." excellenntttte!

laughed out loud at the illusion of wearing the sweater line. ending is perfect

beautifully done

edit- on...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-23-2011, 09:28 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 204
Posted By skagitup
notes for an artist

bla bla bla bla bla

if you can't be attractive be memorable
never jst write ancient passages but utilise those secret
hidden candles of centuries bygone who burn like
potential lost. and whose smoky...
Forum: The Pit 07-22-2011, 08:36 PM
Replies: 127
Views: 2,106
Posted By skagitup
Dr. Donald Montague MD

Dr. Donald Montague MD
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-22-2011, 08:23 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 738
Posted By skagitup
WotW - to lose someone you truly love

you're motionless (thighs in my dreams
spread), your breasts.
that summer dress, swingin on the door
the subtle noises
soft summer rain ****ing the floor outside
brutal gentleman inside ruining...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-30-2011, 03:10 AM
Replies: 2,091
Views: 68,429
Posted By skagitup
hell hath no fury like a woman's snore

hell hath no fury like a woman's snore
Forum: The Pit 07-08-2010, 02:52 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 835
Posted By skagitup
it's a form of superstition yes. but this word...

it's a form of superstition yes. but this word refers to this specific form of it.
Forum: The Pit 07-08-2010, 02:48 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 835
Posted By skagitup
it's not really vanity as much as it is...

it's not really vanity as much as it is superstition. vanity suggests an arrogance which is out of place here really.

say you were watching your favourite sports personality in the olympics and...
Forum: The Pit 07-08-2010, 02:42 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 835
Posted By skagitup
not that no but it's a great book. have you read...

not that no but it's a great book. have you read it?
Forum: The Pit 07-08-2010, 02:38 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 835
Posted By skagitup
good idea but i've already had a look through...

good idea but i've already had a look through wikipedia. can't find it anywhere. i know it exists i'm not going potty.

and a self-fulfilling prophecy is different yeah. that's essentially the...
Forum: The Pit 07-08-2010, 02:29 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 835
Posted By skagitup
what's the word for...

writing an article and i can't remember a specific word that's perfect.

it refers basically to a psychological condition or just a common superstitious way of thinking whereby you believe that...
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