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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-23-2014, 01:50 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 184
Posted By BluePaintCult
You probably already know how I feel about it...

You probably already know how I feel about it :cheers:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2014, 03:34 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 686
Posted By BluePaintCult
Well, when compared to Boyd's Stellar, yours is...

Well, when compared to Boyd's Stellar, yours is stellar. I enjoyed it a lot :)



Incubus - Stellar

Meet me in outer space
We could spend the night, watch the earth come up
I've grown tired of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2014, 12:47 AM
Replies: 5
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Views: 377
Posted By BluePaintCult
I like that you flipped the last word to...

I like that you flipped the last word to your.

I'm in agreement with Aeol, specifically regarding the first half of the first stanza.

Otherwise enjoyable little piece and I like how you've evolved...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2014, 12:29 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 262
Posted By BluePaintCult
the last stanza made it both more.. and less...

the last stanza made it both more.. and less weird for me

I like the spontaneity of this. It makes it very substantive. the focus on espresso hits close to home.

philosophy is the art of defining...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-15-2014, 12:07 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 178
Posted By BluePaintCult
This was cool and I dug it but I thought you...

This was cool and I dug it but I thought you started to lose control of the flow near the end, which could easily be reviewed at your discretion. Namely around the line "he finds a place but not...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-14-2014, 11:45 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 663
Posted By BluePaintCult
I actually enjoyed it a bit in a love/hate kind...

I actually enjoyed it a bit in a love/hate kind of way. I peeve on the fact that you use such staccato phrases at times, but I dig the diction and that makes up for it. :cheers:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-14-2014, 10:50 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 237
Posted By BluePaintCult
Green Ecclesiastics and Anti-Disestablishmentarianism in Free-Form Pt 1.

Well, guys. It's been a really long time since I've posted.

I hope some old schoolers are still around.

Anyway.. Let's get down to business.



Ecclesiastics and Anti-Disestablishmentarianism in...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-17-2014, 06:53 PM
Replies: 82
Views: 2,405
Posted By BluePaintCult
maybe it is cool, like an understood tribute

maybe it is cool, like an understood tribute
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-31-2013, 12:35 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 352
Posted By BluePaintCult
Man, I love it. It's in your face and balls to...

Man, I love it. It's in your face and balls to the wall, and it doesn't care who sees.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-31-2013, 12:23 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 312
Posted By BluePaintCult
interesting, I like this, and turning banshee...

interesting, I like this, and turning banshee into a verb, and the typo in emergency.
it makes you wonder what crime was committed, and I like it when I have to use my imagination.

im glad youre...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-19-2013, 06:35 AM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,484
Posted By BluePaintCult
Just wanted to say I'm alive.

Just wanted to say I'm alive.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-06-2012, 01:19 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 444
Posted By BluePaintCult
Thanks, errone. I agree with you, Carm, but I...

Thanks, errone. I agree with you, Carm, but I think I'll leave the 3rd in anyway :P
Forum: The Pit 04-01-2012, 03:04 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 470
Posted By BluePaintCult
Get old school. owait you cant

Get old school. owait you cant
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-31-2012, 01:23 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 444
Posted By BluePaintCult
Thanks, I edited the structuring and punctuation,...

Thanks, I edited the structuring and punctuation, it was written on the spot quite speedily. Now it should read better, I hope.

I'm considering adding on to it but everything turns out whack when I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-30-2012, 12:30 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 444
Posted By BluePaintCult
Green Starting Fires

I've got the gene pool
breathing down my neck
and I'm Georgia Pine high;
you're a willing, hot mess.
I get surgical with it.

Wanna be, so badly,
wanna be so bad
and split your treasures
amongst...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-09-2012, 08:36 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 310
Posted By BluePaintCult
i can relate to this and therefore think it would...

i can relate to this and therefore think it would only make sense if you changed the line
"as they pass us by"
to
"as we pass them by"
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-08-2012, 03:22 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 172
Posted By BluePaintCult
LOL, Randy's still at it.

LOL, Randy's still at it.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-04-2011, 01:40 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 525
Posted By BluePaintCult
Well, it was good and all but I didn't really...

Well, it was good and all but I didn't really like it. Nothing personal, I just really didn't enjoy it at all. Something about the style annoyed me. o.O Grats on wotw though!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-02-2011, 03:44 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 193
Posted By BluePaintCult
Reminds me a lot of the Dia De Muertos I learned...

Reminds me a lot of the Dia De Muertos I learned about in my Spanish classes.

That's a good thing.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-31-2011, 03:15 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 511
Posted By BluePaintCult
Thanks, jod. That's pretty much the scene.

Thanks, jod. That's pretty much the scene.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-31-2011, 12:50 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 167
Posted By BluePaintCult
Using the phrase "someone like you" is...

Using the phrase "someone like you" is not allowed because the Kings Of Leon song was overplayed to the point of all of us people wanting to murder ourselves as a collective human race whenever it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-28-2011, 01:44 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 394
Posted By BluePaintCult
Not necessarily. It wasn't even close to being...

Not necessarily. It wasn't even close to being your most well written or most inspiring or anything like that, but for me, it was the most enjoyable. Something about it was highly relateable to me,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-27-2011, 02:33 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 394
Posted By BluePaintCult
Probably my favorite thing I've ever read from...

Probably my favorite thing I've ever read from you in the past 8 years.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-25-2011, 10:38 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 272
Posted By BluePaintCult
That was actually a pretty good read, very...

That was actually a pretty good read, very imaginative. I'd like to see it fine tuned and revised some, but I really liked some of the ideas you had in here. :Cheers:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-25-2011, 10:35 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 318
Posted By BluePaintCult
I don't like the phrase "commanded disease...

I don't like the phrase "commanded disease givers." It just sounds forced and out of place in relation to all the prior lines.

The rest was fairly interesting, mostly original, but it felt like it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-25-2011, 10:30 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 164
Posted By BluePaintCult
Well, the title drew me in, let's see what you've...

Well, the title drew me in, let's see what you've got.

You need some work on your tenses. While the first stanza is good, you switch from past tense to present tense in the third sentence, a major...
Forum: Original Recordings 10-25-2011, 10:19 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 273
Posted By BluePaintCult
Thanks guys, pretty sure I returned the favors

Thanks guys, pretty sure I returned the favors
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-25-2011, 10:09 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 511
Posted By BluePaintCult
Thanks, guys. And Carmel, when I have time to...

Thanks, guys. And Carmel, when I have time to reconsider this piece, I'll possibly add something to it and let you know if and when that happens. Glad you liked it for what it is so far,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-22-2011, 03:04 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 278
Posted By BluePaintCult
Well, for what it's worth, I wasn't saying you're...

Well, for what it's worth, I wasn't saying you're on the level of writing that Picasso was on with painting; not that you're not good at it... I was more or less saying that's what you're well known...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-22-2011, 12:54 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 896
Posted By BluePaintCult
Thanks, fellas. Except you, hockey spammer banned...

Thanks, fellas. Except you, hockey spammer banned guy.
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